How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #6 Archive
 Trust Me
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Trust Me

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
babeluv73
Junior Member
since 04-05-2000
Posts 19


0 posted 04-10-2000 06:05 PM       View Profile for babeluv73   Email babeluv73   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for babeluv73

Trust Me

I try to express myself on paper,
A paper that will never understand,
The loves that runs so deep,
As deep as the grains in the sand.

Many have played a factor,
In keeping us apart,
Iíve cried these endless tears,
For the hole left in my broken heart.

We value their opinions,
No matter how much they keep us in the dark.
But if you trust me
Then trust this love,
And together we wonít let it fall apart.




[This message has been edited by babeluv73 (edited 04-10-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 babeluv73 - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
Member Elite
since 03-07-2000
Posts 2858
Between a laugh and a tear...


1 posted 04-10-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

I like your work, hope you plan to post some more. I will keep an eye out.  

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien
Aimster
Member Elite
since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
Charlotte, NC


2 posted 04-10-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Babe

I really liked the flow of this. this was poetically sad and tender. keep up the writing. look forward to reading more from you.

take care  

A M Y

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
weaubleau
Member
since 04-06-2000
Posts 103
MO


3 posted 04-10-2000 08:20 PM       View Profile for weaubleau   Email weaubleau   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for weaubleau

it's true...

anything is possible with enough work...
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 11-06-1999
Posts 43042
Florida's Foreverly Shores


4 posted 04-10-2000 09:11 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Babe~
Welcome to Passion's.
Anything is possible ...
keep on believing in the trust.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

babeluv73
Junior Member
since 04-05-2000
Posts 19


5 posted 04-11-2000 09:34 PM       View Profile for babeluv73   Email babeluv73   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for babeluv73

i hope you guys realize how much your comments mean to me. They are gretly appriciated.

babeluv
Jeffrey Carter
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 04-08-2000
Posts 2424
State of constant confusion!


6 posted 04-11-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

splendid show of emotions in this one
i like it alot

Jeffrey
amazon_lover
Member
since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


7 posted 04-12-2000 11:15 AM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Babeluv!
Love and trust always goes together. I'm sure your friend trusts in you. Cheers lady!
A_L
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #6 >> Trust Me Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors