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babeluv73
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0 posted 04-10-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for babeluv73   Email babeluv73   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for babeluv73

Wishing you were here...

Have you ever closed your eyes so tight
And wished on every star that night
For time to pass,
For the days to go by
For without his love you're lonely inside.

When I look out the window
I can't help but stare
At the very same moon that's over there.
The very same stars, the very same sky
I begin to wonder
"Am I really gonna cry"?

I've never noticed how very dear
Your love means to me.
I've possibly even taken for granted
What God has given me.
He's given me you
With no strings attached.
He's given me you
And I almost sent you back!

I was angry inside...
And nobody knew.
I was jealous inside
And I didn't know what to do.
Who could I tell?
I thought you would never understand.
I thought I lost you to her,
But really she could never compare.




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passing shadows
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1 posted 04-10-2000 06:03 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

very nice first post...WELCOME! hope to see more of you here
EagleOne
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2 posted 04-10-2000 06:31 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

~ Have you ever closed your eyes so tight
And wished on every star that night ~ Oh yes! All too often. Well done and Welcome.


 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien
Cerenity
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3 posted 04-11-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi babeluv73,

This I like very much thank you for sharing.
Welcome to passions,

Cerenity
weaubleau
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4 posted 04-11-2000 12:34 AM       View Profile for weaubleau   Email weaubleau   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for weaubleau

wonderful writing.

hits me right in the heart.
hoot_owl_rn
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Welcome to passions  
babeluv73
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6 posted 04-11-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for babeluv73   Email babeluv73   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for babeluv73

I must say...at first i was quite nervous about sharing my poems with you guys, but now i'm glad i did. Thank you for your comments and interest.
 
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