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babeluv73
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since 2000-04-05
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0 posted 2000-04-10 05:58 PM


Wishing you were here...

Have you ever closed your eyes so tight
And wished on every star that night
For time to pass,
For the days to go by
For without his love you're lonely inside.

When I look out the window
I can't help but stare
At the very same moon that's over there.
The very same stars, the very same sky
I begin to wonder
"Am I really gonna cry"?

I've never noticed how very dear
Your love means to me.
I've possibly even taken for granted
What God has given me.
He's given me you
With no strings attached.
He's given me you
And I almost sent you back!

I was angry inside...
And nobody knew.
I was jealous inside
And I didn't know what to do.
Who could I tell?
I thought you would never understand.
I thought I lost you to her,
But really she could never compare.




[This message has been edited by babeluv73 (edited 04-10-2000).]

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2000-04-10 06:03 PM


very nice first post...WELCOME! hope to see more of you here
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
2 posted 2000-04-10 06:31 PM


~ Have you ever closed your eyes so tight
And wished on every star that night ~ Oh yes! All too often. Well done and Welcome.


 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2000-04-11 12:28 PM


Hi babeluv73,

This I like very much thank you for sharing.
Welcome to passions,

Cerenity

weaubleau
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 101
MO
4 posted 2000-04-11 12:34 PM


wonderful writing.

hits me right in the heart.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2000-04-11 11:15 AM


Welcome to passions  
babeluv73
Junior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 19

6 posted 2000-04-11 09:28 PM


I must say...at first i was quite nervous about sharing my poems with you guys, but now i'm glad i did. Thank you for your comments and interest.
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