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amazon_lover
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0 posted 2000-04-10 04:03 PM


It's what I like my December to be !

I'm not a prince who can make a wish
As its dream, so silence sssssh

I'd like to land in my motherland
I'd like to see everyone I love hand in hand

I'd wish there is no malice in their hearts
Oh! Don't make the world full of bitter parts

Then I'll see my love standing in a corner
With the same love she had for me in her eyes

I wish I could give her a kiss
Which would be an eternal bliss

But a bit scared of her reaction
Unwillingly,I show a slow retraction

Oh god! How can you create such a beauty
I fell for her to the time of infinity

Then we take a walk along the beach hand in hand
Discussing how we're going to make our dreamland

Its so lovely to have our dreams come true
If only we trust and live out of blue

You showed me I was really someone in this world
When the whole world appeared to me blurred

I'd like to show you,I've become the one you thought
Now,I'd like to become the one with you  

I'd give myself with love for you
As my commitments today are only very few

I'd like to forget all about my past
(I wish you do the same...)
As the pleasure of being with you today is so vast

I'd like to think of future with you
Well, only after knowing I'm with you

I wish I can stay for few more days
But with the optimism of better days

I'd leave you love, with a heavy sigh
Waiting for the next December with hopes high...

Contd





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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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1 posted 2000-04-10 06:04 PM


Don't forget your past but share the trust as you would share the future along with THE past..

Good luck..

HUGS

amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
2 posted 2000-04-10 08:46 PM


I feel I should let my mind go of my past

I think its ruining my mind as well as my lover's.

She still has that lovely charm and grace.
But she feels her troubles of past had made her solemn

I feel she's refined now with her life redefined

She's a great person whom I behold much higher than me

Oops!!!! I'll post the rest as my next poem.

Thanks

A_L

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-04-11 10:49 AM


serenity sighs...
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