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Trust in Love

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MoonOnTheOcean
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0 posted 04-10-2000 03:15 PM       View Profile for MoonOnTheOcean   Email MoonOnTheOcean   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MoonOnTheOcean

Falling so hard,
Falling so fast,
Evermore quickly,
I'm afraid it won't last.

The look you give,
The things you see,
Are all the ways
you reassure me.

Trust in beauty,
Trust in love,
Hold my heart
to Heavens above.

Love me truely,
Love me deep,
Love me always,
Even in sleep.

Sins we've sinned,
Boundaries we've crossed,
But may I always have you,
And my soul never lost.

For you are why I laugh,
For you are why I cry,
So remember me always,
Even after We die.

(this one is fresh. I just wrote it lastnight).
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1 posted 04-10-2000 03:36 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

If you love a person so deeply there is no way it can go wrong. I wish both of u a very happy lifetime and lovetime!!!!!!!!

A_L
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2 posted 04-10-2000 03:39 PM       View Profile for NamelessOne   Email NamelessOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NamelessOne

i hope it does last as i know this poem will, great work Moon
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3 posted 04-10-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

MoonOnTheOcean~
This is really quite lovely.
Refreshing as well as 'fresh'.
~*Marge*~



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4 posted 04-10-2000 10:00 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Moon, may your prayers be heard above. . .and may you always know the joys of true love. . .

Wonderful words. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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5 posted 04-10-2000 11:26 PM       View Profile for babeluv73   Email babeluv73   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for babeluv73

Don't worry, the lord hears your prayers. Whatever happens will happen for the best. I hope neither of you ever let go of that love. Great poem!
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6 posted 04-10-2000 11:57 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

I love this poem, but I have to disagree with amazon lover..My heart was comsumed by a love this deep and it was ripped to shreds anyway

Jeffrey
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7 posted 04-11-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

This is great, I love it! Just when you think you can't feel this again someone comes along to make you trust in love again.  

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien
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8 posted 04-11-2000 08:03 PM       View Profile for MoonOnTheOcean   Email MoonOnTheOcean   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MoonOnTheOcean

Thank you all for you kind words. I'm sorry, Jeffery, that you were hurt so. I feel for you.
I love this forum, and how you can get other people's input. It's nice to know what others think of your writing.

               -Travis
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