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Deep Surrender

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Marge Tindal
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Deep Surrender
~*Marge Tindal*~

We've come too far
to turn back
to being just friends
I now know you well enough
to know that your sighs
come from deep within
We've come too far
to turn back now
to a time of just beginning
to see who we could be together
All the joy, all the pleasure
all the pain, has taken us
beyond the plane
of deep surrender
Too far we've come
to turn back
now




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
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1 posted 04-10-2000 08:32 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Oh my word!!!!
This is so close to home, why is that??

It's wonderful...a declaration of honesty.
Great!

 Kathleen

Janet Marie
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2 posted 04-10-2000 08:39 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

*SIGH*
margie-girl this is SO perfect...VERY NICE.
surrender deeply my dear...IMMERSE your self...and sweetly drown...(smile)
jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie

Michael
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3 posted 04-10-2000 08:58 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

You know, that place you speak of can be a ticklish place to be.  There may be no turning back but I hope that doesn't mean you can't continue forward...  that's an even worse place to be.  I wish you the best in all your endeavors.  Beautiful poem.


Michael


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4 posted 04-10-2000 09:28 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Marge,

You have surely touched a lot of passionate nerves with this one. Simply wonderful my dear!

INclan
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Marge,
As always you touch me to the quick. *L* Great poem.
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Marge~ Hey lady! What's shakin?!?   this is so beautiful! I know that place, thank God I didn't go there with my friend or I wouldn't have him today, or would I have?!? ((she asks with self doubt)) -SEA
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Smokin' with this one, Marge!!!
Marie~
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Wow Marge,

This describes a friend of mine to the letter.  Great!!!

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

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very nicely written....I unfortunately have found though depth to be deceiving, hope it is not for you *smiles and hugs*
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IrishRose~
Maybe our spirits have met on the same
plane of surrender ... Thank you.

JanetMarie~
Thank you for the kind comments.

Michael~
Honey, I'm not the slightest bit ticklish.
You know me ... I'll always be going forward.

INclan~
Thank you for those kind words.

Seymour~
Ahhh !  We have a mutual admiration society,
my friend.

SEA !!!!
So ... you surface !
I've been missing you so I came
looking ... glad I rousted you out !
Thanks gal.

Mariee~
Oh ... shucks .. It's not THAT hot !  

D.Huron~
Your friend is LUCKY !  
Thank you for reading.

Corazon~
Hon, I've never been deceived by the
depth of anyone ... yet !  
Sorry if you've had that happen to you.
Better luck, hon.
*Smile* and HUGS back.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 04-10-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Marge, what a wonderful piece this is!  You have expressed, so well, how it feels to reach the "point of no return."  I get the impression that this is a positive thing for you - I hope so!  Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem...


Troy

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http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm
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~Marge~
     You will have to give me a minute to wipe up the teardrops, dear.  This is so touching that I have to agree with Marie ---
it is that hot!


     Terry    

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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Marge you are a lucky woman...sounds like a wonderful place to be.   James
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Oh yes the point of no return...don`t look back ,then jump aahhh. thats my approach anyway, we won`t get into how i`ve fared though. I loved your poem Marge so easy to relate.
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Oh Marge this is wonderful..   That feeling of loosing yourself in the depths of the pit of your stomach...and so be it, if you can't go back, then you must go forward with all the grace that is you..Good luck my friend - he is incredibly lucky to share this time with you..

HUSG
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Here's to sweet surrender!!  





 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
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Marge, just put one foot in front of the other into tomorrow when turning back is impossible.  Great poem!
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James~
Love is always a nice place to be,
is it not?  

Nameless~
Thank you.

RainbowGirl~
Thank you, my dear lady.

Satiate~
Yeah !  

Martie~
Thank you for being YOU !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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sometimes it's no easier to press on than it is to turn back...

in any case, this was great poetry.
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Very beautiful, Marge!

Denise
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ahhhhhhh.... you have put me in a very mellow mood with this one my dear sweet friend....this is awesome  


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Marge Tindal
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Weaubleau~
Maybe ... but forward gear is
what suits me best.
Glad you enjoyed.

Denise~
Thank ya' mam !

ButterfliesDC~
I am soooooo glad you liked !
(Just look at you go with those graphics!)
I love it !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Margie,
This poem is so YOU
That's why everyone loves it,
Including me
Liz
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Elizabeth, my friend~
Thank you for the nice thoughts.
Have a WONDERFUL day.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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