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Deep Surrender |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Deep Surrender ~*Marge Tindal*~ We've come too far to turn back to being just friends I now know you well enough to know that your sighs come from deep within We've come too far to turn back now to a time of just beginning to see who we could be together All the joy, all the pleasure all the pain, has taken us beyond the plane of deep surrender Too far we've come to turn back now ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh my word!!!! This is so close to home, why is that??  It's wonderful...a declaration of honesty. Great! Kathleen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*SIGH* margie-girl this is SO perfect...VERY NICE. surrender deeply my dear...IMMERSE your self...and sweetly drown...(smile) jm ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You know, that place you speak of can be a ticklish place to be. There may be no turning back but I hope that doesn't mean you can't continue forward... that's an even worse place to be. I wish you the best in all your endeavors. Beautiful poem. Michael |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Marge, You have surely touched a lot of passionate nerves with this one. Simply wonderful my dear! INclan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, As always you touch me to the quick. *L* Great poem. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ Hey lady! What's shakin?!?  this is so beautiful! I know that place, thank God I didn't go there with my friend or I wouldn't have him today, or would I have?!? ((she asks with self doubt)) -SEA |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
 Smokin' with this one, Marge!!! Marie~ |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wow Marge, This describes a friend of mine to the letter. Great!!! The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
very nicely written....I unfortunately have found though depth to be deceiving, hope it is not for you *smiles and hugs* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IrishRose~ Maybe our spirits have met on the same plane of surrender ... Thank you. JanetMarie~ Thank you for the kind comments. Michael~ Honey, I'm not the slightest bit ticklish. You know me ... I'll always be going forward. INclan~ Thank you for those kind words. Seymour~ Ahhh ! We have a mutual admiration society, my friend. SEA !!!! So ... you surface ! I've been missing you so I came looking ... glad I rousted you out ! Thanks gal. Mariee~ Oh ... shucks .. It's not THAT hot ! D.Huron~ Your friend is LUCKY ! Thank you for reading. Corazon~ Hon, I've never been deceived by the depth of anyone ... yet ! Sorry if you've had that happen to you. Better luck, hon. *Smile* and HUGS back. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Marge, what a wonderful piece this is! You have expressed, so well, how it feels to reach the "point of no return." I get the impression that this is a positive thing for you - I hope so! Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem...  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
~Marge~ You will have to give me a minute to wipe up the teardrops, dear. This is so touching that I have to agree with Marie --- it is that hot! Terry  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Marge you are a lucky woman...sounds like a wonderful place to be. James |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Oh yes the point of no return...don`t look back ,then jump aahhh. thats my approach anyway, we won`t get into how i`ve fared though. I loved your poem Marge so easy to relate. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Oh Marge this is wonderful.. That feeling of loosing yourself in the depths of the pit of your stomach...and so be it, if you can't go back, then you must go forward with all the grace that is you..Good luck my friend - he is incredibly lucky to share this time with you.. HUSG |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Here's to sweet surrender!!  May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, just put one foot in front of the other into tomorrow when turning back is impossible. Great poem! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ Love is always a nice place to be, is it not? Nameless~ Thank you. RainbowGirl~ Thank you, my dear lady. Satiate~ Yeah ! Martie~ Thank you for being YOU ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
sometimes it's no easier to press on than it is to turn back... in any case, this was great poetry. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) ahhhhhhh.... you have put me in a very mellow mood with this one my dear sweet friend....this is awesome Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Weaubleau~ Maybe ... but forward gear is what suits me best. Glad you enjoyed. Denise~ Thank ya' mam ! ButterfliesDC~ I am soooooo glad you liked ! (Just look at you go with those graphics!) I love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Margie, This poem is so YOU That's why everyone loves it, Including me Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ Thank you for the nice thoughts. Have a WONDERFUL day. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Marge(y) - another soft beauty...and to think of all the ones I have missed. ~mope~ that goes for everyones actually... Oh if only I could LIVE here...reading poems ALL day... LOL (but I'm not an addict - I could quit tomorrow...) K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kamla~ Thank you, sweetie. Oh, that we could all live here all day ! And night ! I don't want you to experience the agony of withdrawal symptoms ... so don't even go there ! Love you, little butterfly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ lovely poem, so romantic and just wonderful. Deeply surrender~ Surrender so deep~ Hearts caressing~ Souls to keep~ Passions burning~ No time to weep~ Hearts melting~ Souls seep Love's moments~ Don't come cheap~ Keep it churning~ It will leap~ Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Didn't intend to bump this one up ... but could NOT let your beautiful response go by. That is just lovely ... thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
"We've come too far to turn back now to a time of just beginning to see who we could be together" Been there, done that, forced to turn back and found it just doesn't work....SIGH...... This is beautiful and I REALLY relate, thanks for sharing. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
you go, girl! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Beki~ Thank you for those comments. I can understand how you 'relate' to it ... especially if it has happened and you've still got those wonderful memories dancing in your heart. *Hugs* to you. Corinne~ Me go? How 'bout YOU girl ! I just love your enthusiasm ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
All right already... I surrender. I just can't keep up with you. Do you get this stuff off the RV lot. I could tell a tale from there or two. So much good writing from you I never know which of you to bump. If you had a book I could just pick it up and read it when ever I want. Naaa, this is good as I get to know you mush better than that. Let me know though..? When you get the time to chat. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ LOL @ 'off the RV lot' ... My e-mail is always open to you and to Rosemary ... Thank you always for your 'reads'. O'Siyo, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, I see I missed this one and everyone has said everything that comes to mind except that this is beautiful and I love you friend. Cerenity |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Hello, precious friend. It's never too late and I appreciate the thought. Love ya'~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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