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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-04-10 07:56 AM


Serenity's Song Of Sigh
~*Marge Tindal*~

Songs sung melodic
from throat of wren
beckoning my love from afar
Come to me in silence
just tell me where you are

Out of the noonday traffic
that clutters and clatters along
Come to me in silence
bring in your heart a song

We will sit quietly in the meadow
while all the world goes by
Sharing a moment of silence
borne on singing of friendship's sigh





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-04-10 08:33 AM


beautiful margie-girl...just beautiful...
as is the person who inspired this...as is the person who wrote it...
she is so sweet, so are you...
ya both make me smile,
take care,jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie


Michael
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2 posted 2000-04-10 09:04 AM


I wanna come too, can I huh, can I huh?
serenity is my friend too...  

Beautifully done, Marge.


Michael

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3 posted 2000-04-10 10:01 AM


Marge, this is truly beautiful. I just love it, it is so calming and soothing. Wonderful poem.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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4 posted 2000-04-10 10:05 AM


Marge~ this is so very sweet. -SEA
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5 posted 2000-04-10 02:32 PM


JanetMarie~
I love our little Serenity and Cerenity, but this really is shared by many friends who sit in the quiet serenity of my heart.
Thanks for enjoying.

Michael~
Sure ... bring along a song
softly sung on a sigh !

ESP~
Ahhh ... that is the beauty of
the serenity of true friendships,
quiet times to soothe the soul.
Thank you.

SEA~
Thank you, sweetie.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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TerryW
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6 posted 2000-04-10 03:31 PM


Margie-dear,
     love this one.  But then again, you know how much I treasure friendship........
  

      

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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7 posted 2000-04-10 03:54 PM


Lovely poem Marge ,thanks for sharing
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2000-04-10 03:58 PM


Marge,
Good thoughts, good words, wonderful poem. *L*

Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2000-04-10 06:36 PM


"Songs sung melodic from throat of wren, Beckoning my love from afar" This is one of the most beautiful phrases I can remember. Marge, you have a muse from above. A true talent beyond measure. Thank you for continuing to grace the forum each day with your lovely words
Liz

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10 posted 2000-04-10 06:43 PM


Beautifully written Marge.
As always....

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



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11 posted 2000-04-10 06:45 PM


sigh is right yuh  

 All Day I Dream About Stanzas!!

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12 posted 2000-04-10 10:12 PM


TerryW~
Yes, I do know .. and it's so nice
to count you as my friend.
You are just a dear.

Nameless~
Thank you.

Seymour~
Thank you, sweetheart.

Lizzie~
You know how romantic my little muse
can be .. she'll love knowing you liked
that phrase ... she did too.
You're such a sweetie.

ChrisG~
Thank you, Chris.
Good to see you.

W.O.W.~
Oh, thank you.
It would be such fun to meet you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2000-04-11 12:34 PM


Sorry Mom--This one is MINE!!!  And that's my story and I'm sticking to it!

How on earth did this get by me?
I'm losing it, I am...

Thank you for the smile today...Now that I've stopped crying, think I'll go enjoy my day--truly a gift from you!

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14 posted 2000-04-11 12:45 PM


This is a lovely song, Marge! Very beautiful!

Denise

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15 posted 2000-04-11 02:13 PM


Serenity~
LOL !  Okay ... I surrender !
Reckon you're entitled to 'homestead' rights.
You're not 'losing it' ...
keep on 'using it' !
Love ya'  ... Keep smiling ~

Denise~
Just keep on singing, luv.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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16 posted 2000-04-11 03:15 PM


So soft and sweet .....
Another wonderful, Marge ...

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17 posted 2000-04-12 03:33 PM


Pepper~
Thank you, hon.
So pleased you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Beki
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18 posted 2000-04-12 03:44 PM


"Out of the noonday traffic
that clutters and clatters along
Come to me in silence
bring in your heart a song"

Loved this! Delightful poem...

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19 posted 2000-04-12 05:39 PM


What a special poem.  I found this quite warming.


Rich


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20 posted 2000-04-12 07:35 PM


Beki~
Thank you for your appreciation.
I have a friend who meets me in the
soft serenity of silence and we so enjoy
the quietness of our friendship.

Rich~
I am very pleased that it 'warmed' you.
This poem also has a 'special' place
in my life and my heart.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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21 posted 2000-04-12 10:10 PM


I loved it, so moving.

 Kathleen


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22 posted 2000-05-07 01:21 AM


IrishRose~
Thank you ... I was perusing the archives and chanced upon your reply.
I appreciate you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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