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Nicole
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0 posted 04-10-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nicole

My touch is slick poison
My words a whispered curse
I am hidden, I am hiding
I am the poorly written verse

I am tired of sharing my heart
Tired of losing out to Fate
Sick of the games attempted with me
Weary of fighting off hate

Tear out my heart and its feelings too
So that I may live my life in peace
Im tired of the sideline hurt
Sweet Apathy - my blissful surcease

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WhiteNite
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1 posted 04-10-2000 01:39 AM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Very cool.  Sounds familiar

 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)
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2 posted 04-10-2000 01:58 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

You totally covered my life

Jeffrey
weaubleau
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3 posted 04-10-2000 02:13 AM       View Profile for weaubleau   Email weaubleau   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for weaubleau

short, but sweet.
good job.
Alicat
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4 posted 04-10-2000 02:32 AM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Yawp...nailed this one right on the head....good job, Satiate.  Keep writing.  


Alicat
dhuron
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5 posted 04-10-2000 04:55 AM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

Great Poem with so much truth,

"I am tired of sharing my heart
Tired of losing out to Fate
Sick of the games attempted with me
Weary of fighting off hate"

This stanza describes my feelings and thoughts so well.

Great job!



 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

Michael
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6 posted 04-10-2000 08:54 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

*sigh*
I doubt anything I can say will help.


Michael
Janet Marie
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7 posted 04-10-2000 09:48 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is AWESOME...
very beautiful poem,
its wisdom and grace kinda blow the first stanza out of the water tho...(smile)
loved this poem.
take care, jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie

hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 04-10-2000 10:07 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Much said in this one  
Nicole
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9 posted 04-10-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Thank you all for your kind replies, and I'm sorry that so many can relate...Apathy is a wonderful thing, but its eventual whiplash of feeling is a bummer.  lol

Michael: Not at all...you know me so well that even your silence is comforting.

JM:  What a sweet thing to say!

Ali: Hey guy, thanks for the read.
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