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Serenade of Song Forgotten

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 04-10-2000 12:41 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

May silent reading lips be still.
May scrolling finger quiver.
May the promise of my name
fulfill you in your need--delivered.

(Would just a whisper from my lips,
winking of one eye--blow kiss--
fix all that you have found remiss--
Serenity becoming Bliss?)

Eyes at rest upon horizon,
hand over heart--
trust begotten?
Mere serenade of song forgotten?

(You knew that it would be like this.)
Electric sparks on fingertips.
© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-10-2000 01:04 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

May silent reading lips be still.
May scrolling finger quiver.
May the promise of my name
fulfill you in your need--delivered.
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(You knew that it would be like this.)
Electric sparks on fingertips.

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ooohhhh baby...may lightening strike twice...thrice...
conducting heat again -- my sweet (smile)
love ya like this...very nice  
jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie

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2 posted 04-10-2000 02:37 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Sounds like someone is very lucky.
Truly great piece of poetry

Jeffrey
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3 posted 04-10-2000 02:41 AM       View Profile for weaubleau   Email weaubleau   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for weaubleau

beautiful.

loved it!

i really enjoy all of your poetry...

thank you so much.
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4 posted 04-10-2000 02:48 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

serenity,
I really enjoyed this. There was humor, pathos, sexiness, thought -- the whole package.   Is this new? Please, ma'am, we'd like some more.

Mike
serenity blaze
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5 posted 04-10-2000 03:37 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

JM--Oooh Baby!  Glad you're keeping up with all of this...(Smart lady, you...)

JC?--ahem-er-Jeffrey--very kind of you to say so--hope he agrees...thanx.

w/b--thanx to you also--love to ya.

Now Mike:

Did you say...
"humor, pathos, sexiness, thought...?"

oh you do wax poetic tonight...absence MUST
make the heart grow fonder....lololol...
And is this NEW?  You KNOW it is the story of me f-ing life...and there's so much more to tell....absolutely love to you--outdone yourself tonight.
Michael
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6 posted 04-10-2000 03:44 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Ah, this is so special.  Love to see this side of you, serenity.  Indeed, serenity becoming bliss!  Loved it.


Michael
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7 posted 04-10-2000 04:17 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Oh me, oh my, oh michael...thank you, so much...love is good, yes?  Even when it's but a breeze blowin' through...fire cannot exist without air...smiles as I exit...
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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I like this, especially the last two lines!
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 04-10-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Serenity~
*Mom* smiles.  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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