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Serenity Blue
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Serenity Blue |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Take me now, then, to task for sin of retreat, being timid... (love has always had a price, in this blur of unfortunate life...) No rainchecks. And no guarantee. Quantity ever limited. So familiar. Yet, it's new. Echoes of my heart in truth. See me reach. See me retreat. Leaning toward what I yet yearn-- cannot forget that fire burns... Yet every other thought is YOU... I feel so silly writing this-- I lick my lips and dream of kiss. Serenity has got the blues... Serenity would rather you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity--love is a dance, yes...back and forth...sigh. Well done poem! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ This is lyrically longing. I like the shade of Serenity Blue. But hope to see Serenity-In-The-Pink too. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Take me now, then, to task for sin of retreat, being timid... (love has always had a price, in this blur of unfortunate life...) No rainchecks. And no guarantee. Quantity ever limited. ------------- I feel so silly writing this-- I lick my lips and dream of kiss. Serenity has got the blues... Serenity would rather you. ----------------- sweet serenity has got the blues.. did you know this brown eyed girl... has been missing you...  where ya been luv?...(smile) you KNOW I love this one...and those lips its perfect! take care serenity-girl jm ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can just picture you singing this in a smokey jazz club somewhere Serenity. . . Just beautiful. . . you have captured it well my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Martie--I KNEW you would follow...thanks. Mom--methinks too much in-the-pink at times... but the computer calvary is coming...and i shall e-mail you into total annoyance asking for advice...luv and hugs. Janet Marie--m'twin...all is well. But a laptop is no replacement for a lap top...lol. sorry to be gone--glad that i'm home...thanx for missing me a bit. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sven--you slipped by me my artful friend--- and what a coincidence--there's an awful lot of smoky jazz clubs here in N'awlins...Thank you m'friend...much appreciated coming from you. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I feel your longing this night, serenity. I can almost hear the saxophones playing the blues in the background of this one. Beautifully done. Michael |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Michael--download some Billie Holiday, some Etta James, top it off with Big Mama Thornton and you are just about serene... Glad to hear from you, incredibly glad in fact...thanx luvie. |
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