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Serenity Blue

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0 posted 04-09-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Take me now, then, to task
for sin of retreat, being timid...
(love has always had a price,
in this blur of unfortunate life...)
No rainchecks.   And no guarantee.
Quantity ever limited.

So familiar.
Yet, it's new.
Echoes of my heart
in truth.
See me reach.
See me retreat.
Leaning toward what I yet yearn--
cannot forget that fire burns...

Yet every other thought is YOU...

I feel so silly writing this--
I lick my lips and dream of kiss.

Serenity has got the blues...
Serenity would rather you.

© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-09-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Serenity--love is a dance, yes...back and forth...sigh.  Well done poem!
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2 posted 04-09-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Serenity~
This is lyrically longing.
I like the shade of Serenity Blue.
But hope to see Serenity-In-The-Pink too.
~*Marge*~



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3 posted 04-09-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Take me now, then, to task
for sin of retreat, being timid...
(love has always had a price,
in this blur of unfortunate life...)
No rainchecks.   And no guarantee.
Quantity ever limited.
-------------
I feel so silly writing this--
I lick my lips and dream of kiss.

Serenity has got the blues...
Serenity would rather you.
-----------------

sweet serenity has got the blues..
did you know this brown eyed girl...
has been missing you...

where ya been luv?...(smile)

you KNOW I love this one...and those lips  
its perfect!
take care serenity-girl
jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie

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4 posted 04-09-2000 11:24 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

I can just picture you singing this in a smokey jazz club somewhere Serenity. . .

Just beautiful. . . you have captured it well my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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5 posted 04-09-2000 11:28 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Martie--I KNEW you would follow...thanks.

Mom--methinks too much in-the-pink at times... but the computer calvary is coming...and i shall e-mail you into total annoyance asking for advice...luv and hugs.

Janet Marie--m'twin...all is well.  But a laptop is no replacement for a lap top...lol.
sorry to be gone--glad that i'm home...thanx for missing me a bit.
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6 posted 04-09-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Sven--you slipped by me my artful friend---
and what a coincidence--there's an awful lot of smoky jazz clubs here in N'awlins...Thank you m'friend...much appreciated coming from you.
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7 posted 04-10-2000 03:35 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I feel your longing this night, serenity.  I can almost hear the saxophones playing the blues in the background of this one.  Beautifully done.


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8 posted 04-10-2000 03:47 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Michael--download some Billie Holiday, some Etta James, top it off with Big Mama Thornton and you are just about serene...

Glad to hear from you, incredibly glad in fact...thanx luvie.
 
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