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Sven
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touch my heart
     touch my soul
          only you can give me
               what i need to feel whole

take my hand
     take my life
          this is what i desire
               i will make the sacrifice

accept my arm
     accept my love
          together we can find
               the beauty up above

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1 posted 04-09-2000 08:58 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Sven,

Very nice. I also like the sliding format. You are starting to remind me of Marge.

INclan
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I enjoyed your poem very much!  I look forward to reading much more!

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that we recognize our oneness,
even as the single droplet of water
knows also that it is the sea."Daniel

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3 posted 04-09-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sven~
This is soooooo pretty.
Your heart is on your sleeve
and I like the view.
~*Marge*~


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Jewl_24_1999
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4 posted 04-09-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for Jewl_24_1999   Email Jewl_24_1999   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Jewl_24_1999

Sven,

I love this, it was very beautiful. I just love your work.
wolfman
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Very good poem Sven.  I like the way you describe love.
kitkat
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6 posted 04-10-2000 05:05 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

This was very romantic(sigh). Letting that special one know how you feel
dhuron
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Wonderful Sven

Showing your feelings and desire, whoever it is, they are a very lucky one indeed!



 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

Marina
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8 posted 04-10-2000 01:27 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

This is truly beautiful Sven.  What a very lucky lady she is!

Marina
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Sven, this is so simple, yet overflowing with devotion and desire...just lovely.

~ Claire
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Nicely done~
Romantic... ahhhh...
Marie~
Joannak
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Sven, I so enjoy reading all of your work.
This was especially sweet.

Joanna


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12 posted 04-10-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sven....touching poem.  She is very lucky whoever she is.  Nice work.

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