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Forever as One |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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In my arms I hold you Gentle Adoring Is my love. Entwined we are In rhapsody Of emotions That quiver inside. Wake me not from slumber As I delight in Your scent Your touch Your warmth. Lay with me In silence Feel our hearts beat In chorus. Hold me now Until the dawn Kiss me tender Overpower That which I feel Love me Feel me surrender. To you My heart belongs Forever Beat as one. "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sweet surrender! and sweet poetry here, i add...spring is definitely stirring up Passions...nice format. lovely words...thanks. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ This is scrumptious ! So very pretty and sensual. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Mariee, you romantic thing, you! This is really beautiful and well spoken.  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Mariee. . . this is perfect!! And because it is. . .that's all that I have to say!! ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Marie, I had to wipe the tears from my eyes just write this. I loved this piece. Simply beautiful. Jeffrey |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
awesome. simply wonderful. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thanks all! I guess I did good with this one! ~Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mariee~ I'd have to say you did really good with this one. It is so loving. I like it a lot!!  -SEA |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thanks SEA~ Glad you like Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marie~ Lovely, my dear. Very vivid imagery. Very soft mood. I really like this one! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Cool~ A thumbs up from Terry  Marie~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"In my arms I hold you gentle" What a beautiful phrase. It sounds like a qoute from a well know poem. But then the entire verse is beautiful. but that opening line left me breathless. Very good writing, indeed Liz |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thanks Liz! For you to say that this is good writing, is an honor. Marie~ |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
Well... I come strolling into passions and what do I find... A lovely poem, Marie. Z |
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