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Forever as One

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mariee66
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0 posted 04-09-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mariee66

In my arms
I hold you
Gentle
Adoring
Is my love.
Entwined we are
In rhapsody
Of emotions
That quiver inside.
Wake me not from slumber
As I delight in
Your scent
Your touch
Your warmth.
Lay with me
In silence
Feel our hearts beat
In chorus.
Hold me now
Until the dawn
Kiss me tender
Overpower
That which I feel
Love me
Feel me surrender.
To you
My heart belongs
Forever
Beat as one.





 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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1 posted 04-09-2000 08:48 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Sweet surrender! and sweet poetry here, i add...spring is definitely stirring up Passions...nice format. lovely words...thanks.
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2 posted 04-09-2000 08:57 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mariee~
This is scrumptious !
So very pretty and sensual.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 04-09-2000 09:00 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Mariee, you romantic thing, you! This is really beautiful and well spoken.  
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4 posted 04-09-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Mariee. . . this is perfect!!  And because it is. . .that's all that I have to say!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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5 posted 04-10-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Marie,
I had to wipe the tears from my eyes just write this. I loved this piece. Simply beautiful.

Jeffrey
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6 posted 04-10-2000 03:14 AM       View Profile for weaubleau   Email weaubleau   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for weaubleau

awesome.

simply wonderful.

mariee66
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7 posted 04-10-2000 09:56 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Thanks all!
I guess I did good with this one!  

~Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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8 posted 04-10-2000 10:00 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Mariee~ I'd have to say you did really good with this one. It is so loving. I like it a lot!! -SEA
mariee66
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Thanks SEA~
Glad you like  
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


TerryW
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Marie~
    Lovely, my dear.  Very vivid imagery.  Very soft mood.   I really like this one!



 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
mariee66
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11 posted 04-10-2000 05:28 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Cool~
A thumbs up from Terry  

      
Marie~
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 04-10-2000 06:29 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

"In my arms I hold you gentle" What a beautiful phrase. It sounds like a qoute from a well know poem. But then the entire verse is beautiful. but that opening line left me breathless. Very good writing, indeed
Liz
mariee66
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Thanks Liz!
For you to say that this is good writing, is an honor.
Marie~
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14 posted 04-12-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda

Well...
I come strolling into passions and what do I find...
A lovely poem, Marie.

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