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Lady in Red
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0 posted 2000-04-09 07:34 PM


My King, I caught it, we are blessed
The spell can be broken at last
I could cry of pure happiness
The magic yell lays in my hand

What to do with this Syllable
Will Jeannie’s manuscript explain ?
The Silly-bus available ?
Where’s Jeannie ? Behind the curtain ?

Doc Moose ! Doc Moose ! She disappeared !
Where is Jinn ? Where did he sent her ?
Tinkerbell, we need your help dear
How do we get to this tower ?

My dear King, I do need a break
Perhaps in a room with a view ?
Play a good game of hide-and-seek ?
Until the crayons need renewed ?

No, we better find our Jeannie
She knows the secret of the spell
Without her powers and lonely
She needs our Moose and Tinkerbell


Lady in Red

  Juliet< !signature-->

 Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou



[This message has been edited by Lady in Red (edited 04-09-2000).]

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ONE FLEW OVER
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Cuckoos Nest
1 posted 2000-04-10 01:46 AM


Lady, Lady, Lady,
what can we do?
I admit
I didn't like
the Jinn at first
but now she's grown
on me.
Lady, Lady, Lady,
what can we do?

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
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2 posted 2000-04-11 03:05 PM


The mysterious Lynx
looks somewhat like a cat
We have seen it before
and once prior to that

It just keeps showing up
on the bottom of posts
And then winks it's green eyes
if we're looking real close

There is something this means
what it is we're not sure
This curious fellow
one more test will endure

We will follow this lynx
and see what gets produced
Curiosity means
quite a lot to a Moose

And un-like a feline
we have nothing to fear
It goes without saying
though the message is clear

One of six silly bulls
is quite positive that
If we follow the lynx
we'll once more see the cat


Dr.Moose1
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3 posted 2000-04-11 03:14 PM


This place is way too drab me-thinks
could use a splash of Red or pink
Cerulean blue or Forest Green
or maybe Andrew and his queen

I'm not quite sure of where this is
along the way to see the "Wiz"
But what a dump , if you get my meaning
it sure could use a good spring cleaning

The sky is all bleak , the land all brown
Bunkers and hangers , what a strange town
Oops ! It's some kind of base , and those guys have got guns
Oh man ! Justin Kace ! It's area Fifty-One !

There's Sculder and Mully , and they've got One Flew !
If the truth is out there , what are we gonna do ?

I recommend we all stay on the bus
that is ( 'less of course ) they start shootin' at us !

Where is that Jinn ? I could use a stiff drink
And some help out of this one , that's what I think !


[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 04-11-2000).]

Andrew Scott
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4 posted 2000-04-12 07:52 PM


I went to get some jelly beans
Did I miss any of the show?
What do you mean the Wizard dead?
Where is Jeannie? I just don't know.

What is that sound that I do hear?
Man but that's one harsh caterwaul
Yet nothing like a jelly bean
Stuffed in each ear to silence all

Now that's better, what' that you say?
Justin's toe is fake and it smells!
No! you say… take the jelly out
Oh… Jinn knows how to break such spells!

I haven't seen her anywhere
By chance did you check the bottles
In the back of the Moose-cle car
The empties by James & Bartles

Hey Moose… stop playing with that cat
It's time to go looking for Jinn
Red you check the whisky and scotch
While I search these empties of gin

Well now we've checked all these bottles
And we've yet to find our Jeannie!
Damn but that Wizard Villanelle
He sure was one mean old weenie!

Yo Doc… where are we heading too?
And say what's with the green eyed Lynx
Tinks lookin' quite nervous my friend
That cat be stalking lunch, me thinks.

Say hey Doc Moose… Where are we now?
Sign says "Area Fifty-One!"
Talk about a drab color scheme
And to many guys with big guns

I can't believe Jeannie is here?
And if this is the shade of truth
I'll drink a six pack of near beer
And a bottle of bad vermouth

I think you better hit the gas
Before we hear the ping of lead
Oh and Moose you need to hold still
Red… smack that bee on Doc's head

Jeannie
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5 posted 2000-04-12 09:40 PM


  

Purr, Purr,
Meow, meow,
Purr, Purr,
Meow, meow,
meow, meow.

E.Fudd
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 38
Dolgeville, N.Y.U.S.
6 posted 2000-04-13 04:23 PM


Awea fifty-wun ?
Can I bwing my gun ?
Wascals are gween
Open fire , save the Queen !

Shhh... I'm twying to twack them down
Take some pwisoners , wook out you cwowns
Intewwogate them , until they wet swip
Confess you cwitters , is this your first twip ?

A tewwible thing , it's worse than I thought
While we were sweeping , the Justins were brought
In "this " and in "that " , they snuck 'em down here
Even got past , that old Balwadeer

Now they're all over , that's Justin Novation
Standing next to their weader , the gweat Justin Vasion

Andrew Scott
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Posts 2558
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7 posted 2000-04-13 05:25 PM


My Lady Red check out that cat
I think it said "I'm where it's at."
Do you rap cat? My Lady Red
Can you two chat? Am I misled?

The cat, the cat… that green eyed lynx
Well look at that! Morris Code winks!
The lynx me thinks is more than that
To make such blinks takes no mere cat!

First letter "J"  Next comes an "I"
What's that you say with blinking eye
An "N" says I… followed by way
An "N" that's bi… lets spell away!

J - I - N - N…Here's what me thinks!
If I'm readin' each of these blinks
That this here lynx does like her gin!
I'll pour the drinks… You look for Jinn.

Why Fudd you spud, how nice of you to join our merry group here at Area 51.  You should feel right at home.   Please do me and the crew a favor while we look for Jinn and I pour these drinks… keep those men with guns at bay.  That's a good chap… Now how do you like your martini?  Shaken, not stirred.  Nice call Fudd… I see you have some culture about you.  Vodka! Oh most certainly for a man of your breeding.  Here, please pass this up to Doc Moose… I heard him asking for a stiff one earlier.  Hey… did you know this cat can blink Morris Code?  Watch…. M - O - R - E … V - E - R - M - O - O - T - H.    Why certainly by dear feline one.  My dear Lady Red… your Shirley Temple.  Cheers!


[This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 04-13-2000).]

Jeannie
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8 posted 2000-04-13 07:01 PM




PURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR~HIC
PURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR~HIC
PURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR~HIC

Dr.Moose1
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Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
9 posted 2000-04-14 07:12 PM


Now look what you've done
Over-looked just one thing
With the Jinn all messed up
What good is my ring ?

Even de-coders , can't help us now
'R-hic over there , is about to blow chow
Elmer's all hammered , and don't care for me much
I'm beginning to think , you may have lost touch

Never give Jeannie , more than one drink
Found that out myself , you don't know what she'll blink
Or for that matter , Fudd ,he's a real mean drunk
Really thought you knew better , or show I had thunk

I'm sure that in Thyme , they will both shober up
Try not to laugh , you keep mishing my cup
An thas one teenie mar-tasty , if you knowwat ahmeen
Nuff of that in yur gullet'll ror out yur schpleen

Did I ever tell ya 'bout them daysh innastute ?
Reel nishe plaish , fulla artishts an fruitss
Everywun theresh shumkinda nuts
Whens we get outta thish , youshkinol kishmabut

Reel nishe plais

Jeannie
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10 posted 2000-04-14 09:20 PM


  


PURRRRRMASTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
PURRRRRPLEASERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
PURRRRRHELPRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
PURRRRRRRME!RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
PURRRRRRRI'MRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
PURRRRRRIGHTRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
PURRRRRHERERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
PURRRRRINSIDERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
PURRRRRRRTHISRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
PURRRRRRRRCATRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR


[This message has been edited by Jeannie (edited 04-14-2000).]

Dr.Moose1
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Posts 3448
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11 posted 2000-04-14 09:45 PM


Jeannie ,
What's wrong ? Cat got your tongue ?

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
12 posted 2000-04-14 09:52 PM


Me thinks the Jinn went to Carnagie hall
have you not heard Jinn sing at all?

Jeannie
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13 posted 2000-04-14 09:53 PM


  

HISSSSSSSSMASTERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
HISSSSSSSSSSYOURSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
HISSSSSSSSSSMEAN!SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

[This message has been edited by Jeannie (edited 04-14-2000).]

Justin Sayne
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 53

14 posted 2000-04-14 09:58 PM


All of this is Justin Sayne
A Jeannie in a Cat
You're Shirley Jesting once again
That's what I think of that!

Just when you think you've found this dame
It's Justine Uff, a ruse
Now look again - A brand new game
Nevertheless confused.....

Jeannie
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15 posted 2000-04-14 10:08 PM


  

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Lady in Red
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Posts 147

16 posted 2000-04-15 08:04 PM


Andrew, all the bottles are checked
No Jinn there I can say for sure
Unless I drank her, then she’s wrecked
*Hic-hic* now I’ll never be cured !

Sorry Doc, didn’t mean to hit
You this hard on your double head
This bee was surely gonna lit
Your nose as Rudolf, yes bright red !

Although I like that colour much
Did not want you to change into
A Moose on fire, that’d be too much
Hey a kitty ! How d’ye do  ?

Argh this cat has four blinking eyes
If I close one eye I can see
JinnCat -CatJinn ? No I don’t lie
There’s Jinn in that cat ! Set her free !

Why is everybody moving ?
Are we going to swing and sway ?
What’s that ‘Drew ? You’re not approving ?
Me drinking these Shirleys away ?

Yoo Crayon King, I never knew
You had a twin brother. That’s swell !
Now Crachet can have half of you
She will be one happy damsel !

Uhh, where did she go anyway ?
Disappeared into Fifty-One ?
She’s an alien nowadays ?
Now I’ve got her a man she’s gone ?

What did I hear between my drinks ?
Doc a ring for Jinn you did bring ?
The one to chain and coutersink ?
Or is that your heart I hear sing ?

Hehe I hear your wedding bells
Or is that Mister Fudd singing ?
An aweful noise, that I can tell
Or is it the Cat/Jinn purring ?

Yes please, pour me another glass
These drinks are tasting mighty fine
You know you’re looking mighty dash
And I never felt so divine *HIC*

Oh dear ‘Drew, I think I can fly
Or is that ONE FLEW flying me ?
Yeek ! Why’s that UFO flying by ?
And Crachet on the steering wheel ?

Justin Nuendo get off that cat !
It’s no horse you see, it’s our Jinn
If you would like to do combat
Why don’t you try our Cheshire Grin ?

Does anyone know where we are ?
And can we drive this Silly-bus ?
Where do we go next ? Delaware ?
Or find this manuscript rebus ?

Lady in Red

  Juliet

 Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou


Dr.Moose1
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17 posted 2000-04-15 11:17 PM


To bring forth the decanter , I'll have to return
Enough idle banter , respect must be earned
That none may supplant her , this is my concern

The Villanelle's chants in memory burned
Off coast of France , for a time I sojourned
To bring forth the decanter , I'll have to return

A repetitive glance , may retrieve what was spurned
How-ever askance the motives which churned
That none may supplant her , this is my concern

Round topic to dance , six stanzas I've learned
Persistance may grant , your master interned
To bring forth the decanter , I'll have to return

I'll leave nothing to chance , no stone un-turned
Such is my stance , with fervor discerned
That none may supplant her , this is my concern

I've got Jeannie's manse , to space-craft I adjourn
Aliens left entranced , be "Fuddled" in turn
To bring forth the decanter , I'll have to return
That none may supplant her , this is my concern

Jeannie
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18 posted 2000-04-16 09:08 AM


  


PURRIdon'tknowhowtolovehimPURRwhattodoPURRhowtomovehimPURR
PURRI'vebeenchangedPURRyesreallychangedPURRinthesepastfewdaysPURR
PURRwhenI'veseenmyselfPURRIseemlikesomeoneelsePURR

PURRIdon'tknowhowtotakethisPURRIdon'tseewhyhemovesmePURRhe'samanPURR
PURRhe'sjustamanPURRandI'vehadsomanyPURRmen beforePURRinverymanywaysPURR
PURRhe'sjustonemorePURR

PURRshouldIbringhimdownPURRshouldIscreamandshoutPURR
PURRshouldIspeakoflovePURRletmyfeelingsout?PURR
PURRIneverthoughtI'dcometothisPURRwhat'sitallabout?PURR

PURRDon'tyouthinkit'sratherfunnyPURRIshouldbeinthisposition?PURRI'mtheonePURR
PURRwho'salwaysbeenPURRsocalmsocoolPURRnolover'sfoolPURRrunningeveryshowPURR
PURRhescaresmesoPURR

PURRIneverthoughtI'dcometothisPURRwhat's it all about?PURR

PURRYetifhesaidhelovedmePURRI'dbelostPURRI'dbefrightenedPURRIcouldn'tcopePURR
PURRjustcouldn'tcopePURRI'dturnmyheadPURRI'dbackawayPURRIwouldn'twanttoknowPURR
PURRhescaresmesoPURRIwanthimsoPURR


[This message has been edited by Jeannie (edited 04-16-2000).]

Nurse Crachet
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Posts 318
They know where I am!
19 posted 2000-04-18 06:44 AM


Stop the bus, stop the bus
I've been hitching for miles
why did you leave so fast?
I had to use the ladies room
came out and the bus is gone.
Got a ride by a dead head freak
said he was following them
everywhere they go on tour.
Then I got arrested somewhere
they thought I was a prostitute
cause I was on the street corner.
Can you imagine that me arrested
well, even though I found a ride here
he was crazy too, into body art.
Why does it sound like Juliet is tipsy
has she been drinking Andrew?
What's with this cat following me
is it hungry or something, who's is it?
I feel like I am in another galaxy,
what has happened here?
What is Juliet trying to say about a man?
I can't understand a word out of her mouth
please stop drenching her in that stuff!
Where is the bag lady,
I mean bottle lady?

Willy Honker
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since 2000-04-18
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20 posted 2000-04-18 06:35 PM


Hey dudes what cha all up too?
I was hoping you'd stop soon
I've been following for awhile
actually since two towns back.
I drove that hitchhiker dame
she's quite the interesting lady
looked at me like I were alien
thought she was gonna bail
right out the door at sixty miles.
So where ya all go'in these days,
crus'in the highway to somewhere?
Hey, I know a cool bed & breakfast
just up the road a bit on the left
was gonna go stay there myself.
Are ya all destined to do the town,
take in a few bars,  do some danc'in?
I'd love to tag with ya, if you'd have me,
I know these parts pretty well myself
wanna catch a few hamburger joints?

Dr.Moose1
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21 posted 2000-04-18 07:50 PM


Often in my ignorance
Far from what's intended
Impressions may be given
Not so easily defended

Though I search for all the right words
Explanation's overdue
Never for an instant
Thought that I had mis-lead you

Most profound apologies
In another incarnation
Such as we view reality
Can you accept my limitations

Only in this refuge
Non-dependant on what's real
Should I express emotions
Take them not as how I feel

Reserved from this another life
Un-imaginative exists
Each must determine their own way
Depending on plot twists



Jeannie
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22 posted 2000-04-18 08:12 PM


All in fun we all do play
twists and turns of words
journey us on our way.
A character to a fun plot
following close day by day.
Never in a moment misled
always just reeling in fun
as the lines are being fed.
The Stute designs a journey
for which we play our game
fun and insanity to be read.

Dr.Moose1
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23 posted 2000-04-18 08:21 PM


Transporter engaged , return sequence lit
Right on the money , Captain Cratchit
You performed like a pro , and I've seen quite a few
Tinkerbell says , that's the last of the crew

One more thing to be done , let's beam up the "Bus"
Should be room in sick bay , where the Jinn will meet us
There's been some confusion , but i think it's all fixed
An out-break of emotions , when some signals got mixed

You'd think that by now , we'd have heard from the "Wiz"
Founder of Passions , the one place there is
One with moose antlers , in a state of confusion
Convinced by you all , to join in your delusions

UFO's and aliens
Surreptitiously normal , once more we begin
Everyone here's got some big time dis-orders
Don't delay Captain Cratchit , let's cross that state border !!!!

Willy Honker
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since 2000-04-18
Posts 9

24 posted 2000-04-19 12:25 PM


Hey, now man
how can that there fine lady
be navigating a space ship?
What have you been drinking
in this here glass?
Some fine cognac smells like to me,
now you know too many of those
an you be hallucinating.
I see such the fine lady
sitting right here on this bus,
now what cha say your name was?
That's what I thought
your my lady hitchhiker,
never miss a pretty face.
Now what's with all these people
seeing things goin on around here,
glad I showed up when I did,
you all need help and I'm the one
to give you some.

Hey, kitty, kitty come on over here
come see good ole Willy boy
I gather this kitty's one of them
stuck up breed,
to good for their own litter box.
Now who here is driving this bus
cause from what I reckon
they're not one of you fit to drive
in this here bus'in buggy,
so here's the deal I'll drive us
to wherever it is your heading too
as long as I get some fair time
with that fine lady Nurse Crachet.
I'll scratch your backs
if you'll scratch Willy boy's,
sounds fair too me
what do all you think about that?
Who's this Jeannie lady
you all talk of, sounds inviting?

Jeannie
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since 2000-03-17
Posts 40
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25 posted 2000-04-21 05:15 PM


Jeannie kitty jumps in Willy's lap
and starts licking all over his face
he tries hard to shoo the kitty away
she digs in her claws as he yells.

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
26 posted 2000-04-22 02:38 PM


To answer all those questions Willy , we'd have to write a book
I've time for one brief session , so let's just have a look
You already know of some of us , if you've been following along
Welcome aboard the Silly-Bus , it's meaning is two-pronged
We use it as a transport , to get from place to place
But it's also the sacred document , which contains both time and space
And speaking of space ( as you well know ) , it's been around for years
T'was Justin Kace who told me so , that it's
between my ears
We're on a quest to find the "Wiz"  ,who's rumored to exist
Somewhere in the "Real World " , beyond the "Screens of Mist "
We know his name , they call him Ron ,he built the Passions site
Though he may be aware , of our little game , he stays out of the spot-light
And so we roam the cyber-realms , the purpose of our mission
To boldly go where none have gone , and bring him recognition .

Bridge to engineering , secure the Silly-Bus
Have Willy report to sick-bay , to make sure he's one of us
Set co-ordinates for Michigan , prepare the warp drive Mr. Scott
The helms all yours there Cratchit , let's see what she's got
With luck we'll soon have wrapped this up , I miss the Institute
My comfy room with rubber walls , and starched white liesure suit
It's fine Corinthian leather , stitched by Ricardo Montalban
The next place that I'm heading for , after we've seen Ron !


[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 04-22-2000).]

Justin Nuendo
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27 posted 2000-04-30 08:32 AM


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Dr.Moose1
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28 posted 2000-04-30 08:32 AM


The three parts of a trilogy
have led a merry chace
With no fore-gone conclusions
we've sojourned from place to place

Begun with but one title
"You Can Ron But You Can't Hide "
I'd like to thank each one of you
It's been a wild ride !

As we approach our destination
I'd like to share a thought
Perhaps in some small manner
we'll leave with more than what we brought

An idle flight of fancy
took a life on all it's own
To the state of mass confusion
with delusions quite full-blown

Through it all we kept the thread
without intervention
Should you chance upon this writing Ron
may we please have your attention ?

I think I speak for all of us
but I may not have a clue
Etched somewhere in the memory banks
are two big words ... THANK YOU !


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