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Ode to my love

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amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
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0 posted 04-09-2000 06:23 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi!!
I needed some resort to vent out feelings which is really pushing me to bouts of depression and I'm amazed by this haven in internet. Help me guyz as this is my second poem....I can't write the first one without my lover's consent. It's a lovely place.


ODE TO MY Love

I'm in love with u dear
I'd like to be with you always near
When are you going to understand
And say exacly where we stand
Have you ever been clear with your feeling
Have u ever come out with your ailing
Understand,I'm not the one who caused your falling
How can I do that being so loving

When everyone said u're not a not a person to be
trusted
I felt, I should get everyone busted
Whenever you told about your dreams
I wanted to be a small part of it by all means
I know you love me dear and want me to be near
So please hear without any fear..

I know you dislike me to the max
When you feel I should be stoned to death' do it,
Supremax
My dear,but my love for you will rise out of the  
ashes as a phoenix


I've tried in every way to make u understand
You're the love with whom I always stand

You beat me, cheat me, bleed me to death, stoning
Every night u'll hear a moaning
Which will be the mourning for me and my love
Which would have died though as fresh as a white
dove

I hold you in such high esteem
I always think we'll form a very good team

But history repeats.....

I repeat my love to you
You never care and you'll never dare


But  dear,
I'll always be near
You should never fear
Lord is always here
For everything you find it hard to bear

Nothing is lost when u love someone
If they don't respond to your emotion
It doesn't mean that they have no love notion
For love doesn't require a celebration
It requires silent appreciation

I've hurt some on my way here
But I've never hurt you dear
It was my silent fear
They prevented me from being clear

You say I can count on you as a friend
As you think I'm a disguised fiend
Have u ever tried to make urself clear
Maybe, its the fate of your star

I'll always say to myself I've not deserved your  
love
Though when you ask yourself its truer the other
way

As I said I'm emmotional, Emma
I've never been in an emotional dilemma
I've pretended to be stonehearted in the past
Pains that hurt me were so vast
  
You think I'm dishonest
It's 'coz you never dared or cared to trust
Hiding yourself is dishonest
So come out with your trust

I know u've felt the pain every bit in the past
Please realize,I went through it more aghast

I'm not a sinner or a winner
I'm just a sincere lover or a weaver..
Weaving dreams of you and me as a single body and
mind,
For which you're a totally blind..

It's not going to be my call again
I'd have caught my next train
I'd have left you in pain
Our love ending up in vain  

I'm going to take a break
I'm letting it to yourself to be awake
And see how my hearts quake
Its a transperent lake and not a fake


If not on earth,
Let our soul meet in heaven
As in earth,
I'm just a busted goal and love-bitten

Please forgive me for saying all these
If your love was just a tease
Or your way to please

I'm going far away from you even farther from
where I'm..
I'd like to gain strength to build a new  
friendship...
To explore more..
To smile as I've forgotten it for a while..
To see every relationship is honest rain from
heaven...
To be free from guilt...
Which you've biult..

When I love someone again,
It'll be just not a lean on others' shoulders
It'll be a trust strong enough to displace
mighty boulders..
Of 'mistrust' and replacing it with 'musttrust'
Which you can never understand as u'll never trust

I'm going Emma...
Its upto you now to find me..
I've given myself to you long ago..
I've always lived upto your expectations of person
But u thought me only as an arson..
It's true in a way, as I'm in a self made prison..
Saying everytime I'll not let anyother person..
To replace my prized possesion..
Please don't you mistake it for  obsession....

Flying fish never stays in air all the time..
It returns to water when the bells chime..
I was a flying fish one..
I had to be to see the world above..
I was just peeping to see where we can fit in with
peace..
As I don't want it to be a temporary lease..

See you and have a nice time...
Ask yourself, if u have sometime...
Please ask yourself and the people around if you
fail to see..
The happiness I have felt just seeing you..

Sincerely

Amazon_lover
(A true lover)















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Poet deVine
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1 posted 04-09-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome. I see you have lots of emotion in your work, it's nice to be able to express them isn't it? I look forward to reading more from you.
serenity blaze
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2 posted 04-09-2000 07:17 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

"replace mistrust with musttrust..."
very nice...

tho' I do disagree a bit...silent love?  naw...
CELEBRATE!!!  make a joyful noise!

(but people tell me i'm a bit naughty too...)

Welcome!  I enjoyed the read!
amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


3 posted 04-09-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Thanks Serenity!

I'm just a beginner so ur suggestions are welcome
Dawn Eclipse
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since 01-31-2000
Posts 640
The Horsehead Nebula


4 posted 04-09-2000 09:10 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was a lovely piece.  It was very emotional.  I enjoyed it very m uch and look forward to reading much more from you!

 "It is in our aloneness
that we recognize our oneness,
even as the single droplet of water
knows also that it is the sea."Daniel

*Cassie Roseen*


INclan
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since 07-20-99
Posts 1046
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5 posted 04-09-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Welcome to Passions, Amazon_Lover. There are plent of good poets here who enjoy helping us improve.

INclan
serenity blaze
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6 posted 04-09-2000 09:19 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Oh...I forget...don't go...Emma loves you. I'm sure of that...
amazon_lover
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Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


7 posted 04-10-2000 03:03 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Thanks once again!!!!!

I'll write a few more but this with the optimism of finding Emma as she was with all faith.

I'm going to wait for her.

THANKS
A_L
TerryW
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Posts 787
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8 posted 04-10-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

welcome to passions, amazon_lover!
     We're very gald to have you here, and hope you will stay around a long time!  
And I love the strength and the imagery in your poem.  Great Work!




 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 2712
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9 posted 04-11-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi amazon_lover,

Very nice, look forword to more of your work.
Welcome to passions
Cerenity
amazon_lover
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Dublin,Ireland


10 posted 04-11-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Thanks cerenity!
Your poems are full of strength and life in it. Great !

A_L

hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 04-11-2000 08:57 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

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