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MoonOnTheOcean
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0 posted 04-09-2000 02:39 PM       View Profile for MoonOnTheOcean   Email MoonOnTheOcean   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MoonOnTheOcean

As I pass under-leaf of the Hallway of Trees,
I see the melodic greens of the leaves turn amber.
Green grass lays like a carpet woven with threads of life beneath the trees.
Ivy hangs from the outstreched limbs,
dangling playfully on the soft grass.
I remember laying in that grass,
with ivy hanging and trees glowing.
I remember like I lived it a thousand times.


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Lone Wolf
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1 posted 04-09-2000 02:49 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

MoonOnTheOcean,
Wow....this was excellent.  I can just picture myself laying there in the grass.  I love it!!!     

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Superb Images!

Wonderfully done Moon

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

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3 posted 04-09-2000 07:17 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

MoonOnTheOcean~
This is LOVELY ...
Serene is the green of the ivy
touching the grasses.
Just lovely.
~*Marge*~


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a beautiful portrait of ivy, as it spreads so do your words with joy.

 Kathleen

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