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Rain Drops

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MoonOnTheOcean
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0 posted 04-09-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for MoonOnTheOcean   Email MoonOnTheOcean   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MoonOnTheOcean

As I walk through the rain
I feel each drop hit my skin.
Time is so slow,
there is an eternity between each drop.
I can't feel myself walking.
I fall to the ground.
With my eyes still open,
All I see is darkness in the rain.
A dreary night for a soul to lose it's spark.
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Lone Wolf
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Welcome to Passions, Moon.  You seem to be very in touch with the beauty of Mother Nature in your writing.  That is wonderful and I love it.  Hope that soul finds the spark soon.  Very sad indeed.

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dhuron
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Wonderful Poem Moon,

I also love walking in the rain*S*

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

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