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ElektraXOXO
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since 2000-04-07
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San Antonio Tx

0 posted 2000-04-09 01:22 PM


Twice I fell in love with you
Twice I saw the world in you
Twice you broke my heart in two
Now there is no love
So to hell with you!


Love is love
Love is true
I found that out
By loving you
So If you love me
Love me well
cause if you dont
you can go to hell!

© Copyright 2000 Yvonne Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2000-04-09 01:27 PM


Elektra,
Enjoyed the read, both are funny.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-04-09 02:02 PM


I think that about sums it up...James
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-04-09 02:24 PM


Elektra

my sentiments exactly! u go girl!

take care,
amy

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Jeffrey Carter
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4 posted 2000-04-09 02:28 PM


Honest.....To the point....What more can you ask?                
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                        Jeffrey

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