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Jeffrey Carter
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Girl, I love you so much now
it would be hard to say good-bye
You are the ONE I've been dreaming about
for all of my life
And all that time I never thought
my dreams would come true
But lady now I know they have
'cause I found my dreams in you


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1 posted 04-09-2000 01:12 PM       View Profile for ElektraXOXO   Email ElektraXOXO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ElektraXOXO

How incredibly sweet, and straight fromyour heart, I love it!!!  
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2 posted 04-09-2000 01:58 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

you could be a song writer...do you sing? or play guitar?

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

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jeff

you write another zinger! whomever this lady is best wake up and appreciate what she has! i wish you both the best of luck and love!

take care,

amy

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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4 posted 04-09-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Thanks for the kind words Elektra


Romantic Heart ...this actually started out as a song, but was never finished....i play guitar , but not sing

Aimster ....thanks for the encouraging words , but the girl this was for is long since gone.....=(

Thanks again everyone!
                             Jeffrey
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5 posted 04-09-2000 02:54 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Nice heart felt piece. I am sorry that she is no longer the inspiration for you dreams.  
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6 posted 04-09-2000 03:00 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Jeffrey,
This was so sweet.  Sorry to hear that she is gone.  looks like she let a good one slip away.  Hang in there....you never know when those dreams will reappear....with the right one this time.     Excellent work!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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7 posted 04-09-2000 04:57 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Oh, this is a sweet poem. I'm glad that, in a way, your dreams have come true.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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8 posted 04-10-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is sweet, Jeffrey!

Denise
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The song of love....this is very well done, and made me remember similar feelings and promises. Thank you for the reminded and thank you for sharing.

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

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This is very sweet  
 
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