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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 2000-04-09 01:00 PM


Girl, I love you so much now
it would be hard to say good-bye
You are the ONE I've been dreaming about
for all of my life
And all that time I never thought
my dreams would come true
But lady now I know they have
'cause I found my dreams in you



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ElektraXOXO
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1 posted 2000-04-09 01:12 PM


How incredibly sweet, and straight fromyour heart, I love it!!!  
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2 posted 2000-04-09 01:58 PM


you could be a song writer...do you sing? or play guitar?

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


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3 posted 2000-04-09 02:25 PM


jeff

you write another zinger! whomever this lady is best wake up and appreciate what she has! i wish you both the best of luck and love!

take care,

amy

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Jeffrey Carter
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4 posted 2000-04-09 02:35 PM


Thanks for the kind words Elektra


Romantic Heart ...this actually started out as a song, but was never finished....i play guitar , but not sing

Aimster ....thanks for the encouraging words , but the girl this was for is long since gone.....=(

Thanks again everyone!
                             Jeffrey

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5 posted 2000-04-09 02:54 PM


Nice heart felt piece. I am sorry that she is no longer the inspiration for you dreams.  
Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2000-04-09 03:00 PM


Jeffrey,
This was so sweet.  Sorry to hear that she is gone.  looks like she let a good one slip away.  Hang in there....you never know when those dreams will reappear....with the right one this time.     Excellent work!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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7 posted 2000-04-09 04:57 PM


Oh, this is a sweet poem. I'm glad that, in a way, your dreams have come true.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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8 posted 2000-04-10 09:28 PM


This is sweet, Jeffrey!

Denise

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9 posted 2000-04-10 09:39 PM


The song of love....this is very well done, and made me remember similar feelings and promises. Thank you for the reminded and thank you for sharing.

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


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10 posted 2000-04-10 09:58 PM


This is very sweet  
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