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Open Poetry #6

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MoonOnTheOcean
New Member

since 2000-04-08

Posts 8

0 posted 2000-04-09 10:18 AM

Stars above sing my song.
Seas below fill my heart.
Love abound soothes my soul.
And your kiss ties them all.

Make me the one
And I'll promise tomorrow.
When night comes,
And you are too tender
to be left alone.

I surrender my heart to you.

Evening air catches your light
And sends me a shiver
But your lips warm me.

Now is the time
To make it ours.
Come close to me.

I surrender my heart to you.

[This message has been edited by MoonOnTheOcean (edited 04-09-2000).]

mariee66
Senior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

1 posted 2000-04-09 10:53 AM

What loving sentiments you display here~
Touching this is~
Has she read this?

Marie~

MoonOnTheOcean
New Member

since 2000-04-08

Posts 8

2 posted 2000-04-09 01:19 PM

I am not sure if she has read it yet, although I have sent it to her. I'll keep you updated.

[This message has been edited by MoonOnTheOcean (edited 04-09-2000).]

ElektraXOXO
Junior Member

since 2000-04-07

Posts 30
San Antonio Tx

3 posted 2000-04-09 02:01 PM

What a very touching poem I hope she like it

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2000-04-09 02:11 PM

This was lovely! Any girl in her right mind would like this. I hope she appreciates it! Good luck!

Take care,
AMY

~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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