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MoonOnTheOcean
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0 posted 04-09-2000 10:18 AM       View Profile for MoonOnTheOcean   Email MoonOnTheOcean   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MoonOnTheOcean


Stars above sing my song.
Seas below fill my heart.
Love abound soothes my soul.
And your kiss ties them all.

Make me the one
And I'll promise tomorrow.
When night comes,
And you are too tender
to be left alone.

I surrender my heart to you.

Evening air catches your light
And sends me a shiver
But your lips warm me.

Now is the time
To make it ours.
Come close to me.

I surrender my heart to you.





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mariee66
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1 posted 04-09-2000 10:53 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

What loving sentiments you display here~
Touching this is~
Has she read this?

Marie~    
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I am not sure if she has read it yet, although I have sent it to her. I'll keep you updated.

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ElektraXOXO
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What a very touching poem I hope she like it
Aimster
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4 posted 04-09-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

This was lovely! Any girl in her right mind would like this. I hope she appreciates it! Good luck!

Take care,
AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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