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Happiness In The End

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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 04-09-2000 09:27 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams
But dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
And every now and then a special dream comes along
One that will be remembered 'til the dreamer's day's are through
If we don't give up on chasing them, they just might come true
Along our journey to finding them we may stumble and fall
But in the end we can still be happy 'cause at least we gave our all



 

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1 posted 04-09-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

"But dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep"

very cool line...very well written poem
I like your style of writing...more words of wisdom.
take care, jm

 The stars shine so bright, now's the time
I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face,
Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you
And held you close.
Now I will reach for the stars...
Because Oh my love, that's where you are...
Though the storms of black night rage on
I still see your face
I still feel your lips on mine
And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...
vertical horizon

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2 posted 04-09-2000 11:11 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

I'm a firm believer that persistance pays~
Good job with this one~

Marie~
Jeffrey Carter
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3 posted 04-09-2000 11:29 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Thanks JM & Marie ,
I really needed to hear that.

                            Jeffrey
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4 posted 04-09-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

-Jeff

this really was a great piece..flowed along so pretty! you have a style of writing that i very much like as well. keep up the great work. will continue to look forward to reading more from you.

take care,

amy
p.s. thanks for your lovely comment to my poem. *HUGS*

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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