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Timeless

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Michael
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0 posted 04-09-2000 03:33 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

TIMELESS


Everything about you,
compliment waiting to spill
from sweet lips of seduction...

I look into the eyes
of my emerald heaven
I feel the soft pull
I am falling
I cannot shake this,
I cannot fight this,
I am helpless
I am yours
forever

Touch me now,
take me in your arms
dance with me
Am I dreaming
Is this real
I am mesmerized
I have never felt
such a stir of emotion
I wish this
to never end...

The world spinning endlessly,
one, we stand
completely still
Eyes interlocking
emotion raining
tears from the soul
One soul
one motion
sweetly pure
together
in unison
of love and lust
of passion
we are
timeless

Look unto me
my sweet lover
Hold me now
the hour is ours
Feel my hands upon
your shivering body
as I peel the dressings
of the soul.
Lay with me,
love with me.
withstand my passions.
Melt in my desires
wild,
untame
touch my heart...
Hands to my chest,
open me up,
find me
I am yours

Let me touch your heart
let me quell the
storms of your soul
Lay quiet,
tranquil in my arms
by every caressing stroke
of my fingers through
your hair
love me
hold me
body to body
soul to soul
Lay with me
grow with me
but sleep first, love
Sleep gently
peacefully
in my arms
always

Michael Anderson




[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 04-09-2000).]
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Nicole
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1 posted 04-09-2000 04:02 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Timless, indeed.  Stunning poem Michael, it speaks volumes...like I've said before I believe, Love knows no time, nor distance, nor circumstance.  

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
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2 posted 04-09-2000 04:24 AM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

Michael,

Simply wonderful!   Great Poem

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

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3 posted 04-09-2000 04:26 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Let me touch your heart
let me quell the
storms of your soul
Lay quiet,
tranquil in my arms
by every caressing stroke
of my fingers through
your hair
love me
hold me
body to body
soul to soul
Lay with me
grow with me
but sleep first, love
Sleep gently
peacefully
in my arms
always

timeless

-----------------

okay...ALL together now...
*SIGH*...(smile)
(looking in mirror...damn, eyes are still brown)   LOL

I think it is poeticly perfect this be my last read tonite...
so intensly beautiful M, do you know how happy it makes me to see you like this...
lucky girl...that green eyed angel  
take care,
brown eyed girl/jm
Jeffrey Carter
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4 posted 04-09-2000 08:43 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Micheal,

  I have seen few poems that compare to any one of the pieces I've seen by you. It is truly mezmerizing to see how you can take simple words and turn them into such beautiful works of art.
                         A fan forever,
                         Jeffrey Carter
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5 posted 04-09-2000 09:04 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Incredible! I am at a loss for words again!  
Miss.Queeny
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6 posted 04-09-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for Miss.Queeny   Email Miss.Queeny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss.Queeny

Michael

Wow. This is the best poem I have read by you, and it truly touched me like few of the poems on here have, as I can relate to it, and we all know we long for a love like that...if you have found it, good luck and I'm jealous  )

Love, Peace and ApAtHy...QUEENY xxx
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7 posted 04-09-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

This is breathtaking~
The emotions conveyed are leaving me to say 'WOW'!

Beautiful work~

Marie~
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8 posted 04-09-2000 12:08 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Passionate, tasteful, real, moving,
loving, and wonderful.
Not to overdo, but this was incredibly
poetic and romantic. Something like this could only have been written from a heart full of love. Congratulations.

 Kathleen

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9 posted 04-09-2000 12:11 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Michael, once again you have wowed the ladies with your romantic words and wowed me with your poetic abilities. Very nice work.
devina
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10 posted 04-09-2000 01:20 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Ah, if only I could sink into your arms right now...twould be heaven once over babe...

Again your words warm my heart, my soul, and my nights without you...

*Simply beautiful darlin*

Much love,
from your green eyed angel...


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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11 posted 04-09-2000 02:34 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

-michael

this has to be my favorite piece by you! and trust me that was a hard choice! like i have said before you are an exquisite writer. You deliver line after line of powerfully intense emotion. i have never honestly seen a person who writes the way that you do...with so much passion. whether its sad or happy poetry...scared or lonely poetry..its all beautiful. and i sit in awe of you!

take care,
AMY  
p.s. I am so very happy to see that you may have finally found some happiness. god bless.

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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12 posted 04-09-2000 06:27 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Michael~



~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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13 posted 04-09-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

ooohhhh...lovely and incredibly INSPIRATIONAL...smiles, hugs, and a naughty little wink atchya!

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 04-09-2000).]
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14 posted 04-09-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Lucky girl indeed ...  

Simply breathtaking.  I promise to pant unobtrusively ... hehehe

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

Michael
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15 posted 04-10-2000 04:02 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Satiate, Indeed, love knows no bounds at all.

Janet, lol on the brown eyes.  My eyes were dark brown most my life and for some reason have recentely took on some green... makes you wonder, huh?

Jeffrey, quite a compliment there, my sincerest thanks.

Miss Queeny, sorry to make you jealous...LOL  I was not aware you were smitten.    Love, Peace and ApAtHy ... now that's a new one...

Kathleen, love can never be overdone me thinks.

Balladeer, to "wow" you I take as a serious compliment - TY, my friend.

devina, Heaven, indeed.  Where were those arms tonight, anyway?

Amy, thank you for such a deep reply.  I'm glad this piece stands so highly for you.  There was much emotion beneath it, indeed.

serenity, thank you my friend and a   right back at ya.

Kess, you caught me completely off guard with that onee...  just promise I can watch o.k.?  

Everyone, thank you for the kind replies.


michael


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16 posted 04-10-2000 04:10 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Michael, kindly allow me to slip in my awestruck felicitations here...this is, indeed, a treasure.

~ Claire
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Oh, you caught me off guard.  Tears.  The words "Lay with me
grow with me
but sleep first, love
Sleep gently
peacefully
in my arms"
especially tugged at this heart that has known terrible loneliness and longing in my time.

Thank you for trusting us with such a tender jewel.
NamelessOne
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18 posted 04-10-2000 04:19 AM       View Profile for NamelessOne   Email NamelessOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NamelessOne

WoW what a powerful piece with emotion that just jumps out and grabs you,fantastic
 
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