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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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TIMELESS Everything about you, compliment waiting to spill from sweet lips of seduction... I look into the eyes of my emerald heaven I feel the soft pull I am falling I cannot shake this, I cannot fight this, I am helpless I am yours forever Touch me now, take me in your arms dance with me Am I dreaming Is this real I am mesmerized I have never felt such a stir of emotion I wish this to never end... The world spinning endlessly, one, we stand completely still Eyes interlocking emotion raining tears from the soul One soul one motion sweetly pure together in unison of love and lust of passion we are timeless Look unto me my sweet lover Hold me now the hour is ours Feel my hands upon your shivering body as I peel the dressings of the soul. Lay with me, love with me. withstand my passions. Melt in my desires wild, untame touch my heart... Hands to my chest, open me up, find me I am yours Let me touch your heart let me quell the storms of your soul Lay quiet, tranquil in my arms by every caressing stroke of my fingers through your hair love me hold me body to body soul to soul Lay with me grow with me but sleep first, love Sleep gently peacefully in my arms always Michael Anderson [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 04-09-2000).] |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Timless, indeed. Stunning poem Michael, it speaks volumes...like I've said before I believe, Love knows no time, nor distance, nor circumstance. May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Michael, Simply wonderful! Great Poem The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Let me touch your heart let me quell the storms of your soul Lay quiet, tranquil in my arms by every caressing stroke of my fingers through your hair love me hold me body to body soul to soul Lay with me grow with me but sleep first, love Sleep gently peacefully in my arms always timeless ----------------- okay...ALL together now... *SIGH*...(smile) (looking in mirror...damn, eyes are still brown)  LOLI think it is poeticly perfect this be my last read tonite... so intensly beautiful M, do you know how happy it makes me to see you like this... lucky girl...that green eyed angel take care, brown eyed girl/jm |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Micheal, I have seen few poems that compare to any one of the pieces I've seen by you. It is truly mezmerizing to see how you can take simple words and turn them into such beautiful works of art. A fan forever, Jeffrey Carter |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Incredible! I am at a loss for words again!  |
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Miss.Queeny Junior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 22 |
Michael Wow. This is the best poem I have read by you, and it truly touched me like few of the poems on here have, as I can relate to it, and we all know we long for a love like that...if you have found it, good luck and I'm jealous  )Love, Peace and ApAtHy...QUEENY xxx |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is breathtaking~ The emotions conveyed are leaving me to say 'WOW'! Beautiful work~ Marie~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Passionate, tasteful, real, moving, loving, and wonderful. Not to overdo, but this was incredibly poetic and romantic. Something like this could only have been written from a heart full of love. Congratulations. Kathleen |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Michael, once again you have wowed the ladies with your romantic words and wowed me with your poetic abilities. Very nice work. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Ah, if only I could sink into your arms right now...twould be heaven once over babe... Again your words warm my heart, my soul, and my nights without you... *Simply beautiful darlin* Much love, from your green eyed angel... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
-michael this has to be my favorite piece by you! and trust me that was a hard choice! like i have said before you are an exquisite writer. You deliver line after line of powerfully intense emotion. i have never honestly seen a person who writes the way that you do...with so much passion. whether its sad or happy poetry...scared or lonely poetry..its all beautiful. and i sit in awe of you! take care, AMY  p.s. I am so very happy to see that you may have finally found some happiness. god bless. ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ooohhhh...lovely and incredibly INSPIRATIONAL...smiles, hugs, and a naughty little wink atchya! [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 04-09-2000).] |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Lucky girl indeed ... Simply breathtaking. I promise to pant unobtrusively ... hehehe --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Satiate, Indeed, love knows no bounds at all. Janet, lol on the brown eyes. My eyes were dark brown most my life and for some reason have recentely took on some green... makes you wonder, huh? Jeffrey, quite a compliment there, my sincerest thanks. Miss Queeny, sorry to make you jealous...LOL I was not aware you were smitten. Love, Peace and ApAtHy ... now that's a new one...Kathleen, love can never be overdone me thinks. Balladeer, to "wow" you I take as a serious compliment - TY, my friend. devina, Heaven, indeed. Where were those arms tonight, anyway? Amy, thank you for such a deep reply. I'm glad this piece stands so highly for you. There was much emotion beneath it, indeed. serenity, thank you my friend and a right back at ya.Kess, you caught me completely off guard with that onee... just promise I can watch o.k.? Everyone, thank you for the kind replies. michael |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Michael, kindly allow me to slip in my awestruck felicitations here...this is, indeed, a treasure. ~ Claire |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, you caught me off guard. Tears. The words "Lay with me grow with me but sleep first, love Sleep gently peacefully in my arms" especially tugged at this heart that has known terrible loneliness and longing in my time. Thank you for trusting us with such a tender jewel. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
WoW what a powerful piece with emotion that just jumps out and grabs you,fantastic |
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