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Confession (not to be taken seriously)

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Master
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0 posted 04-09-2000 02:52 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I came here only for one reason
After the years Iíve spend in prison
Iíve realized how much Iíve missed
I asked myself whom should I see,
And since the Allah wasnít free
You were the next one on my list

I wonít commit the deadly sins
Iíll stay from rice and beans
And Iíve already lost all sense of pride
I will not envy other men
Iím sure that You will understand
I have to lust from night to night

Iím not so sure of number seven
I need to have my share of heaven
And You should know rare it happens
Iíll never use Your name in vain
But holy **** itís such a pain
To follow Your commandments

I even went to Church one day
Iím sorry that I could not stay
In my defense I had the flu
And with the gain of missing class
I was the altar boy at Mass
But I forgot just what to do

Last month, I even read your Word
Although I slept, Your voice I heard
Your readings were fantastic
The one with Abraham was best
To put the poor guy to the test
Now thatís an instant classic

Dear Father, Son and Holy Spirit
Whichever one, I hope You hear it
You said yourself, ďhelp out a stranger!Ē
I do not need a V-I-P
Just let me sit right there with Thee
And find for me a younger angel!

© Copyright 2000 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 04-09-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

ok...i wont take it seriously...
BUT seriously...this is damn good.
I thoroughly ENJOYED this read...
very witty and well written.
take care, jm

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie

Master
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2 posted 04-09-2000 11:45 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank you Janet! Glad you enjoyed it!

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 04-09-2000).]
 
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