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Your Love |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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YOUR LOVE SOMETIMES I FIND MYSELF THINKING ABOUT YOU I HAVE TO STOP MYSELF BEFORE I CRY SOMETIMES IT'S HARD AS HELL TO LIVE WITHOUT YOU I OFTEN FIND MYSELF WONDERING WHY I REMEMBER ONCE I HAD EVERYTHING I NEEDED BUT THAT WAS LONG AGO AND NOW MY BROKEN HEART IS PLEADING FOR YOUR LOVE TO BE HERE WITH ME SO I WON'T HAVE TO BE ALONE BUT ALL THAT'S JUST A FANTASY NOW THAT YOU'RE GONE I REMEMBER CRYING WHEN I HEARD YOU SAY GOOD-BYE I FELT MY HEART WAS DYING, OH GIRL, IT HURT SO MUCH INSIDE THEY SAY YOU NEVER FORGET YOUR FIRST LOVE AND GIRL I KNOW IT'S TRUE CAUSE EVEN WHEN I'M DEAD AND BURIED I'LL STILL REMEMBER YOU WHEN YOUR LOVE WAS HERE WITH ME AND I DIDN'T HAVE TO BE ALONE BUT ALL THAT'S JUST A FANTASY NOW THAT YOU'RE GONE |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions Jeffrey! This is a heartbreaking poem and an experience that I am sure most of us, if not all of us, have been through. It surely does hurt. Please check your email for a special welcome and I look forward to reading more of your poems! Denise |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
-Jeffrey First I extend my warmest welcome to you...welcome to Passions, the best group of people at any forum on the web! (my opionion). This poem was sadly beautiful. Many will be able to relate to this piece. great work u have here. take care and i will be looking for more of your work. amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thanks guys! I wrote this at a very sad point in my life. I really enjoy reading all the great poetry on this site. You guys are great. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I first welcome you to passions, secondly, to the world of broken hearts...Keep your heart in tact...and wait for the right one!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! First loves always linger!  "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I can relate well to your pain, my friend. Welcome to Passions. Michael |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
To all of you I wish to say thank you for being so kind. I enjoy all of your poetry and insight's . Jeffrey |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Welcome to the open arms of Passion's friends. Your entry was perhaps sad, but I envision happier works from you in the very near future. Write your heart ... and we'll share the songs it sings. You will LOVE it here ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I have been someone's "fantasy" and it is very painful, because I, like you and all of us are so real. I'd rather have the reality of a poetic heart and sustance to my expression than to live with the pain, but oh, it makes for wonderful poetry doesn't it? Congratulations on this fine piece Kathleen |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thanks marge, I already love it here Kathleen, I know exactly what you mean. But this happened a few years ago so I am over it Jeffrey |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
welcome to Passions, Jeffrey! Corinne |
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