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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 04-09-2000 01:15 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

YOUR LOVE

SOMETIMES I FIND MYSELF THINKING ABOUT YOU
I HAVE TO STOP MYSELF BEFORE I CRY
SOMETIMES IT'S HARD AS HELL TO LIVE WITHOUT YOU
I OFTEN FIND MYSELF WONDERING WHY
I REMEMBER ONCE I HAD EVERYTHING I NEEDED
BUT THAT WAS LONG AGO AND NOW MY BROKEN HEART IS PLEADING

FOR YOUR LOVE TO BE HERE WITH ME SO I WON'T HAVE TO BE ALONE
BUT ALL THAT'S JUST A FANTASY NOW THAT YOU'RE GONE

I REMEMBER CRYING WHEN I HEARD YOU SAY GOOD-BYE
I FELT MY HEART WAS DYING, OH GIRL, IT HURT SO MUCH INSIDE
THEY SAY YOU NEVER FORGET YOUR FIRST LOVE AND GIRL I KNOW IT'S TRUE
CAUSE EVEN WHEN I'M DEAD AND BURIED I'LL STILL REMEMBER YOU

WHEN YOUR LOVE WAS HERE WITH ME AND I DIDN'T HAVE TO BE ALONE
BUT ALL THAT'S JUST A FANTASY NOW THAT YOU'RE GONE
© Copyright 2000 Jeffrey D. Carter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-09-2000 01:58 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions Jeffrey! This is a heartbreaking poem and an experience that I am sure most of us, if not all of us, have been through. It surely does hurt. Please check your email for a special welcome and I look forward to reading more of your poems!

Denise
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2 posted 04-09-2000 02:06 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

-Jeffrey

First I extend my warmest welcome to you...welcome to Passions, the best group of people at any forum on the web! (my opionion). This poem was sadly beautiful. Many will be able to relate to this piece. great work u have here. take care and i will be looking for more of your work.

amy  

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Jeffrey Carter
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3 posted 04-09-2000 02:10 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Thanks guys! I wrote this at a very sad point in my life. I really enjoy reading all the great poetry on this site. You guys are great.
devina
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4 posted 04-09-2000 02:37 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I first welcome you to passions, secondly, to the world of broken hearts...Keep your heart in tact...and wait for the right one!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 04-09-2000 02:39 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! First loves always linger!


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

Michael
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6 posted 04-09-2000 04:08 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I can relate well to your pain, my friend.  Welcome to Passions.


Michael
Jeffrey Carter
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7 posted 04-09-2000 11:41 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

To all of you I wish to say thank you for being so kind. I enjoy all of your poetry and insight's .

                                Jeffrey
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8 posted 04-09-2000 11:45 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Jeffrey~
Welcome to the open arms of
Passion's friends.
Your entry was perhaps sad, but
I envision happier works from you
in the very near future.

Write your heart ... and we'll
share the songs it sings.
You will LOVE it here !
~*Marge*~



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9 posted 04-09-2000 12:22 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

I have been someone's "fantasy" and it is very painful, because I, like you and all of us are so real. I'd rather have the reality of a poetic heart and sustance to my expression than to live with the pain, but oh, it makes for wonderful poetry doesn't it?
Congratulations on this fine piece

 Kathleen

Jeffrey Carter
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10 posted 04-09-2000 12:26 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Thanks marge,
I already love it here

Kathleen, I know exactly what you mean. But this happened a few years ago so I am over it

                                 Jeffrey
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welcome to Passions, Jeffrey!

Corinne
 
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