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Raining Tears

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mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind


0 posted 04-08-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mariee66

I call to you...
You hear not my soulful plea.
I'm left to perservere-
In a world so cruel it seems.

I cry for you...
My tears falling on barren ground.
Tears with the weight of the world-
Forever coming down.

My need for you...
Grows stronger everyday.
My lover, my constant friend-
Return once more I pray.

My love for you...
Forever here remains.
Thus my falling tears-
Fall forever like longing rain.



 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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tracie66
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1 posted 04-08-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Mariee~
A soulful piece that I could feel the urgency in. I hope he comes back to you soon
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 04-08-2000 11:32 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mariee~
Lovely and sincere.

'My love for you...
Forever here remains.
Thus my falling tears-
Fall forever like longing rain.'

I like your sentiments.
~*Marge*~


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Dawn Eclipse
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3 posted 04-08-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Veyr lovely!  and emotional too.  I loved your last line... "Thus my falling tears-
Fall forever like longing rain."  Very beautiful.  I look forward to more from you!  

 "It is in our aloneness
that we recognize our oneness,
even as the single droplet of water
knows also that it is the sea."Daniel

*Cassie Roseen*


mariee66
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4 posted 04-09-2000 10:38 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Thank you Tracie, Marge and Dawn E.~
You know... I almost got rid of that last line~
Glad I didn't~

Marie~  
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5 posted 04-09-2000 10:42 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Very moving piece Marie. I could almost hear those tears. keep em coming
                                Jeffrey
Janet Marie
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6 posted 04-09-2000 10:55 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

marie...girl this is excellent
the ryhme flow is like butter!!(smile)
and the poems emotions are so sweet and perfect.very nice work here.
and yes, the last line...PERFECT...Im so glad you didnt take it away too!

take care, jm

 The stars shine so bright, now's the time
I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face,
Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you
And held you close.
Now I will reach for the stars...
Because Oh my love, that's where you are...
Though the storms of black night rage on
I still see your face
I still feel your lips on mine
And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...
vertical horizon

Aimster
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7 posted 04-09-2000 11:49 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Marie

This is a piece of poetic perfection. each line flowed so smootly into the next. beautiful expression of your feelings. great job!

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
ElektraXOXO
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8 posted 04-09-2000 02:18 PM       View Profile for ElektraXOXO   Email ElektraXOXO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ElektraXOXO

A very lovely piece. I enjoyed it  
mariee66
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9 posted 04-09-2000 07:02 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Jeffery, Janet, Amy and Elektra~
Thank you very much for your kind words~

Janet and Amy... smooth... like butter, eh?!  I'm smiling    
Marie~
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