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Dog Days |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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I run to greet her every day, My face in wild elation. I never fail to wag my tail In hopeful expectation. I follow her around the house. Where she goes, there I'll be. A simple pet is all I get But that's enough for me. What she desires is good by me. If she throws, I'll play fetch. Whatever game is hers to name; If she runs, I'll play catch. I only ask for tender words, Someone to understand. A gentle touch would mean so much- I'd be hers to command. But she has not been good to me. She seldom wants to play. Sometimes she's gone all night 'til dawn To where? She doesn't say. Now she's been gone for three whole days! This is my epilogue. It is no life to have a wife Who treats you like a dog.  |
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tom Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 90s/w penna u.s.a. |
balladeer Good one!!! Can't you get her neutered? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Loved this poem deer, and at the risk of sounding ???, have you tried humping her leg? |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
On that last post by Martie... OH MY GOSH!! I just had a rescue (Boxer) that decided my six yr old was just the right size... tried humping him numerous times  Of course the six yr old didn't think it was funny!Anyway... good One! Marie~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Poor Balladeer~ Poor little puppy ! Here I am thinking sweet little thoughts and Martie and Mariee are 'woofing' it up ! Here, baby ... roll over and I'll rub your little tummy.  A new collar for you. Nice boy ! Here's a treat ....  That's a good boy ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Bal This was excellent, You fooled me! Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Well you asked for it, and you got it. Enjoyed the poem. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Some VERY interesting responses here  Tom....I tried. She won't hold still long enough! Martie...I tried. She won't hold still long enough! (but I LOVE the way you think!) Mariee...I agree. I, too, am speechless! (but smiling) Marge.... You trying to collar me?? and I'LL decide who gives the bone to who!!!!!!!!!!! You continue to crack me up! Tracie...I thank you. It's fun to fool.. Sy....Yep, I guess I did. Thanks for stopping by |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Balladeer, Great poem...all I can say is: you need to raise your standards. (lol) INclan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You fooled me with the ending too! This is hillarious! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I shall not comment on the other replies  But I will say this is great! I loved it..had me fooled till the zinger at the end! (Could I see you wag your tail, just once?) LOL |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Balladeer, you have a wonderful imagination! Woof, woof. Corinne |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
MAN I love this place LOL Balladeer you just make my day... thanks for the heartfelt laugh this morn... oh how i relate to this...ya know what my nick name aroungd here is-- SHEP!!! swear to god LOL Martie... cant believe YOU said that...but it needed to be said LOL give her fleas--that will get her attention take care, jm |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Maybe if you were house trained things would be different my friend? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer, your tales about your tail never fail! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL...only you my deer, only you |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Balladeer, poor thing left all alone with no one to pet you, well what did you chew up! LoL Cerenity |
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