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MoonOnTheOcean
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since 2000-04-08

Posts 8

0 posted 2000-04-08 06:02 PM

As the Waves

Silent waves falling over a timeless world,
deep is the gaze in your eyes.
A wave cascades around my legs
and I fall to my knees.
After the wave has receeded back to the powerful sea,
A tear is born and falls,
then dies on the cold wet sand beneath me.
I sprawl myself across the sand
Hoping for the moon
and praying for my demise.
Your hand is cold now and so are your eyes.
Colder than the beach below us.
Your eyes close
and so does my heart as I let you go.

Travis Church

Copyright ©2000 Travis Church

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-04-08 06:11 PM

Travis~
Welcome to Passion's.
This is a BEAUTIFUL render.
The emotion of the tear taken
to the ocean is powerful.
Hope to see more from you for sure.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-04-08 11:54 PM

Welcome to Passions, Travis! This is an excellent poem! Please check your email for a special welcome! I look forward to reading more from you!

Denise

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

3 posted 2000-04-09 12:13 PM

A very deep and profound good-bye. What a poem! A heart-rending experience. Especially the comparison between this deepest anguish, and the enormity of the ocean.

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

4 posted 2000-04-09 12:45 PM

Welcome to Passions, Travis. I also like your Marker...I have sailed on a boat named: Con Moto.

INclan

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2000-04-09 02:30 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Loved your poem, very emotional and heartfelt!

"Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

6 posted 2000-04-09 02:47 AM

This is the most breathtaking entrance!!! I welcome you in awe...!!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

7 posted 2000-04-09 04:11 AM

Excellent poem, Travis. I loved this.

Welcome to Passions.

Michael

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2000-04-09 12:10 PM

Travis,
Welcome to passions!! This is a beautiful entrance. I loved all of it!! Looking forward to more!!

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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