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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-04-08 03:57 PM



She beholds passion within her heart,
A power of love woven deep,

While minds are awake,
Hearts sleep,

She beholds a power within her soul,
A power of leadership, control

Where kingdoms are at war,
People cry out for more,

She beholds a love deep with compassion,
A love of family, friends everlasting,

Love of none to compare,
Hearts emotions do stir,

She beholds herself in beauty and poise,
Across lifes' dance throughout the noise,

Her grace, her honor,
Her loyalty runs through,
Devoted and true,

She beholds a child, the gift of life,
Creator of love through sacrifice,

Life to be born and given,
Yet dying of herserlf, yet living,

She beholds hope, dreams of wonderous delight,
Hope of happiness and peace,visions of light,

Where love is lifes melody,
All creation walks in harmony,

She beholds a tune, a song she often sings,
About the lover of her heart,

The romance of her hearts king,
The vision inside her daydreams,

What is this tender creature, this delicate beauty, this mysterious, enchanted thing you look upon?

Behold the power, the beauty, Behold the love of a woman.




 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-04-08 04:57 PM


Romantic this is lovely...I have seen the beauty of a woman...they are the loveliest creatures on this earth.    James
Danny Holloway
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Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-04-08 05:01 PM


Very nice writing.
   "a tender creature
    a delicate beauty
    mysterous enchanted thing"
Makes me want to go out and fall in love.

your are definitely "A Romantic Heart"

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-04-08 06:49 PM


RomanticHeart~
You've captured the essence
of the true woman of compassionate heart.
Very lovingly done.
~*Marge*~


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Denise
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4 posted 2000-04-09 12:06 PM


Very very beautiful!!

Denise

INclan
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since 1999-07-20
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Indiana, USA
5 posted 2000-04-09 12:17 PM


Indeed, the love of a woman is a wonderful thing. thank you for blessing us with your insights.

INclan

p.s. I responded to your other poem. See: "Solitary Tear"  Sadly, I received no comment from you.

[This message has been edited by INclan (edited 04-09-2000).]

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2000-04-09 02:01 AM


I am sorry Inclan...I didn't mean to overlook you...here is a hug  !!!Please forgive me...?Thanks for your replies!

James...I am glad you view women so tenderly  Thanks for always reading!

Danny...Do you have to go out to fall in love?Thanks!for the compliment  

Marge...thank you for seeing through my poetry! and for the compliment

Denise you always make my day!Thank you  
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 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-09-2000).]

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