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BrazilianGirl
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since 2000-03-26
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0 posted 2000-03-29 06:38 AM



Take this love out of your head
take is sadness from your eyes
there is no reason for this searching
its not worth crying
wasted time
fake love
that he gave you
end of the story
you are lost
once again
and as the river searches for the sea
you came looking for me
and find in my heart the love he didn't want to give
and now u travel in my body
without fearing happiness
and I give you my heart
and I make love to you
as I never did
I loose my head
I play your game
Im your toy
your gift from heaven
I do it all to make u happy
I hold u
I make you dream
and as the sun comes out
you forget me
and once again u go
taking  a piece of me
and again I sit here
waiting for you

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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
1 posted 2000-04-03 03:35 PM


I know whatcha mean. I try so hard to walk away but its so hard and it never seems to work. i'm fine till he comes back then it starts all over again
**Angel**
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since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

2 posted 2000-04-06 01:58 PM


I agree with you so much! It is so hard to walk away and when you do, they come right back and it tears your heart into a million pieces. I am going through this right now.
I have no idea what to do next. I have walked away and now I sit here missing him so much.
It is just so hard. Any advice?

Thanks!

Angel

[This message has been edited by **Angel** (edited 04-06-2000).]

X Angel
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Oregon
3 posted 2000-04-08 12:30 PM


I am moving this one too, to Open Forum so everyone can enjoy it.

Denise
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4 posted 2000-04-08 11:00 PM


Welcome to Passions! This is very sad and very well written!

Denise

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-04-09 12:26 PM


BG~
This is quite lovely.

'as the river searches for the sea
you came looking for me'

~*Marge*~



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6 posted 2000-04-09 12:36 PM


This poem packs much emotion....and truth. Well written piece.
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