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BrazilianGirl
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0 posted 03-29-2000 06:38 AM       View Profile for BrazilianGirl   Email BrazilianGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrazilianGirl


Take this love out of your head
take is sadness from your eyes
there is no reason for this searching
its not worth crying
wasted time
fake love
that he gave you
end of the story
you are lost
once again
and as the river searches for the sea
you came looking for me
and find in my heart the love he didn't want to give
and now u travel in my body
without fearing happiness
and I give you my heart
and I make love to you
as I never did
I loose my head
I play your game
Im your toy
your gift from heaven
I do it all to make u happy
I hold u
I make you dream
and as the sun comes out
you forget me
and once again u go
taking  a piece of me
and again I sit here
waiting for you
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just_another_fe
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since 02-05-2000
Posts 504
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1 posted 04-03-2000 03:35 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

I know whatcha mean. I try so hard to walk away but its so hard and it never seems to work. i'm fine till he comes back then it starts all over again
**Angel**
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2 posted 04-06-2000 01:58 PM       View Profile for **Angel**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for **Angel**

I agree with you so much! It is so hard to walk away and when you do, they come right back and it tears your heart into a million pieces. I am going through this right now.
I have no idea what to do next. I have walked away and now I sit here missing him so much.
It is just so hard. Any advice?

Thanks!

Angel

[This message has been edited by **Angel** (edited 04-06-2000).]
X Angel
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since 11-07-1999
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3 posted 04-08-2000 12:30 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

I am moving this one too, to Open Forum so everyone can enjoy it.
Denise
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4 posted 04-08-2000 11:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions! This is very sad and very well written!

Denise
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5 posted 04-09-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

BG~
This is quite lovely.

'as the river searches for the sea
you came looking for me'

~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 04-09-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This poem packs much emotion....and truth. Well written piece.
 
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