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BrazilianGirl
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0 posted 03-29-2000 06:08 AM       View Profile for BrazilianGirl   Email BrazilianGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrazilianGirl

This isnt a very good one but when you have a relationship like mine sometimes words cannot come out as you want... I just love this person very much


I can feel your presence
I feel how your love can be present
even in your absence.

Today I stopped to write a bit
and what I write is for you

I want write about what the others
do not know and cannot see

I want to define you
I wanna compare you eyes with
the shine of the moon
And see in your smile the hope
for the future

I cannot write poetry and never could
I only have my feelings that's all I ever had

I hope in my words you feel my love
I wish one day you will realize
that my feelings made me remember
your love inspired
the words I today write
to light a little
part of your life
© Copyright 2000 BrazilianGirl - All Rights Reserved
**Angel**
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since 03-31-2000
Posts 157


1 posted 04-06-2000 02:01 PM       View Profile for **Angel**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for **Angel**

That is an excellent poem. You can write poetry very well. Poetry to me is my feelings and that is what makes it good.

Keep writing!
Dawn Eclipse
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since 01-31-2000
Posts 640
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2 posted 04-07-2000 10:07 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was a lovely expression of feelings.  Everybody has them, and you do well showing them, even in your poetry.  You write well!  I know what its like to feel like that, and i'm glad you are so happy.  

 Sometimes the most important things can't be seen with the eyes, but are rather felt with the heart.
*Cassie Roseen*

X Angel
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since 11-07-1999
Posts 1592
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3 posted 04-08-2000 12:27 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

Hi   I enjoyed your poem....but since it is a poem, I am moving it to the Open Forum so that everyone can enjoy it!
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 04-08-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Essa foi uma surpresa. Esta muito bem escrito e repleto de sentimentos sinceros
Voce disse que nao e poeta, mas essa poesia e bem melhor do que muitas outras escrito pelos poetas americanos
Parabems.
Liz
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
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5 posted 04-08-2000 05:25 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Lovely writing..I enjoyed the line...I hope in my words you feel my love..I wish one day you will realize...that my feelings made me remember...your love inspired the words I write today...Very powerful...I was touched..I can feel you love thru your words.  James
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6 posted 04-08-2000 06:59 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

BrazilianGirl~
Your poetry is lovely.
Your heart is writing with you and
that's what it's all about.
Your images are profound.
Wonderful piece of you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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