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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 2000-04-08 11:46 AM



Iam on my way,
You're on your own,
We decided to be like this,
when the time is right,
maybe,god knows,
We'll find own way,
to find a suceess in life,
To live own way,
Iam on my way,
you're on your own,
We both someday,
be back on the same track  again,
We'll walk on the right track,
To find our way home,
Iam on your my way,
you're on your own,
To find ourselves a way,
To find a sucess in life,
To heal the pain,
Love is all there for us,
We can be on the track,
where we belong,
I'm on my way,
you 're on your own,
to be yourself agin,
On your own

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Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-04-08 11:53 AM


Sounds like two people taking separate paths.
Sometimes it's necessary if we are to find our place in this world.
Nice verse.< !signature-->

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

[This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 04-08-2000).]

Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

2 posted 2000-04-08 12:22 PM


Nicely done Vandana.  Well written.
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