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vandana
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0 posted 04-08-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Iam on my way,
You're on your own,
We decided to be like this,
when the time is right,
maybe,god knows,
We'll find own way,
to find a suceess in life,
To live own way,
Iam on my way,
you're on your own,
We both someday,
be back on the same track  again,
We'll walk on the right track,
To find our way home,
Iam on your my way,
you're on your own,
To find ourselves a way,
To find a sucess in life,
To heal the pain,
Love is all there for us,
We can be on the track,
where we belong,
I'm on my way,
you 're on your own,
to be yourself agin,
On your own
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Danny Holloway
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1 posted 04-08-2000 11:53 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Sounds like two people taking separate paths.
Sometimes it's necessary if we are to find our place in this world.
Nice verse.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

[This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 04-08-2000).]
Mike
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2 posted 04-08-2000 12:22 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nicely done Vandana.  Well written.
 
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