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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-04-08 10:06 AM


The Fairies say

It's safest to play

By candle light

And not by day

Their shadows dance

In the candle light

With their wings spread

Sparkling bright

To catch a fairy

Dancing like so

At the bottom of the garden

Wings aglow

Is just pure delight

A fantasy come true

With wings of gold

That are see-through

They dance until

The morning light

Then disappear

Until it's night

Then out they come

To dance once more

Upon a dew dropped

Dance floor


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


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Aimster
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1 posted 2000-04-08 11:26 AM


I like!! This poem was full of magic and such beauty. thanks so much for sharing!

take care,

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Danny Holloway
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2 posted 2000-04-08 11:27 AM


~~~~~~~Very nice poem~~~~~~~~~~~~
Martie
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3 posted 2000-04-08 12:06 PM


What a lovely and charming poem.  Well done!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2000-04-08 12:10 PM


Tracie66,
Charming and delightful to read.

tracie66
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5 posted 2000-04-08 11:17 PM


Amy~
Thanks, I love writing about fairies for my daughter Amy. She's growing up fast but still loves them.    

Danny~
Thanks so much for reading it.

Martie~
To you also a big thank-you  
Glad you were charmed.

Sy~
Glad that I could charm and delight you my friend  


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Dawn Eclipse
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6 posted 2000-04-08 11:35 PM


Very nice to read.  I enjoyed your poem very much!


 "It is in our aloneness
that we recognize our oneness,
even as the single droplet of water
knows also that it is the sea."Daniel

*Cassie Roseen*



mariee66
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7 posted 2000-04-08 11:40 PM


Hmm.. I almost missed this one.
Good writing!
I liked this one a lot.

Marie~

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8 posted 2000-04-08 11:49 PM


Tracie~

You fairly make the faeries dance ...
this is sheer enchantment.
Love ~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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9 posted 2000-04-09 09:15 AM


Cassie~
So glad you liked it  

Mariee~
I love to write about these adorable little creatures. Thanks for your reply  

Marge~
Thanks for your most colourful and visual reply. It's just fabulous what you do.

Thanks to all Tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


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