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For Never My Love

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Marge Tindal
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For Never My Love
~*Marge Tindal*~

You promised it would be forever
our love would always be
For never would you ever want
to spin outside of the circle of me

With each day's dawning
I glowed in the splendor of your love
You took me to the heights of joy
clear to the Heaven's above

Of all the things you shared with me
of all the thoughts so tender
the things I most remember
are the moments of your love

For never would I leave you
and the joy that you bring
For never my love
you are the coming of my spring

The blooming of this rose
with fragrance ever-sweet
Knowing I am more
because your love I keep

For never have I longed
to ever be apart
For never will I leave you
keeper of my heart





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Oh, Marge.  You are such a smoothy!

Great poem. I hope you showed it to "Him"

INclan
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Partners

On a blooming spring,
This red rose looks so pretty
With emerald leaf

may i dedicate this haiku to you? ")
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'Sigh' ... another beauty, Marge ....

 "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars."
_Les Brown_
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For never have I longed
To ever be apart
For never will I leave you
Keeper of my heart........

Marge~
A lovley poem which I enjoyed reading immensely
Tracie~


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I like it a lot!!!!!!
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Ah, a beautiful poem about true love. I'm glad you have found it!  

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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For never will a poet write such lovely verse as Marge when she writes of lovely love.
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Beautiful! I love this one Marge!  
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Marge, Beautiful poem, bless you my dear. *L*
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INclan~
Thank you, dearie.

Kaile~
Lovely Haiku ... thank you.

Pepper~
Thanks for the *sigh*.

Tracie~
You warm my heart with your replies.

VanDana~
Thank you, hon.

LoveBug~
Love is everywhere, dear.

Martie~
Thank you, my friend.
Love is a subject very near and dear to
my heart for sure.

PoetdeVine~
Glad you enjoyed.

Seymour~
Hugs sent your way.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~



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Ah, this is so beautiful, Marge!

Denise
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Thank you, Denise~
It's kind of grown on me too.
~*Marge*~


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I smelled the rose in this one!
ahh spring and love!!!
wonderful

 Kathleen

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IrishRose~
Ahhhhh ... it's always Spring
in a heart that is in bloom with love.
Thank you for liking.
~*Marge*~



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I believe it's always spring around here for me too Marge... Lovely poem...nice to see your heart so vulnarable for once..he he

Love you
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Absolutely beautiful Marge, so sweet, tender and sincere  
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Devina~
You glow with KARMA  

Hoot~
Thank you, my friend.
I think we both have
tender, sincere hearts.
~*Marge*~



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WHAT A WONDERFUL PICTURE OF LOVE YOU PAINT
MAY I CLEAN YOUR BRUSH...........AGAIN!!
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Ahhhh! My ~Warrior~ Sweet ~Warrior~
It's complete now !  
You softly kiss my spirit with the
brush of your gentleness.  
For you ... anything !
~*Marge*~



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Wow.  Awesome poem.  Sounds like true love... I notice there are past tense words there though.  If it's love in the past then remember....

Better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all....

Not sure I go for that, but hey... it helps to hear it sometimes. =)

 "We always said it would be good to go away, someday,
but if there's nothing there to make things change,
if it's the same to you I'll just hang."
--Matchbox20 (Hang)
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I didn't say I'd leave you never.
What I said, Marge, was "Leave your liver!"
You know Matilda, my old aunt...
She'll need it soon for her transplant!

The doc said it would be a bargain
To find an inexpensive organ.
Those livers are not cheap, you know
So let her have it should you go.

And while we're talking parts, I mean,
My grandpa Bob can use a spleen
And my dear mother, bless her heart
Needs so much who knows where to start!

Then, if you do, you will have found
That you will ALWAYS be around
And when I think of my aunt's liver
I'll think of Marge, the Indian giver!!!
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WhiteNite~
Thank you for your observations and
your pleasure.
True love is always remembered ...
past .. present .. or future
it's all the same LOVE.

Balladeer~

Leave it to you
my wacky friend,
to break the spell
of where I've been.

Grandpa Bob is on his own
when it comes to getting my spleen.
I'm a real Indian giver alright
now I'll bet you think I'm mean.

To haiti's with Aunt Matilda
on this liver that really rates.
Just to show what a meanie I am
I'm giving it to Bill Gates ! !

You are an absolute brat !
~*Marge*~



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