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lucky
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0 posted 04-08-2000 08:42 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lucky

Remember

Spring is
a miracle when
ever it happens buds
break robins return and
ever so softly wellcome as I was
in courage by a fiend to be gone this
journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold
get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there
yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft
and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you
into a piece full come for table ground but if you no
thing like me you be tried of the same mold
contempt or airy voids that sneaks to
glory fly woke gather then tall
ants which draft tick
ally skewers art and graces
such in dived level souls with the
drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any
be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own
lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams
thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé
in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart
con trash to ease kind of odor ease
very same will not rest pond
to a poets rule of dumb
which pears to be just act
ally what they lethal ridge ally
cordon wit newt protest or sin sure
as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of
finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough
will fat make it add mire able odor
I weight for the voids to rule
ball looming nocturne
ally true in neat..?


 

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-18-2000).]
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1 posted 04-08-2000 08:56 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lucky~
It matters not the years of your calendar,
with beauties like this ...
you are forever young !

This is so replete with imagery.
You are doing some marvelous poetry,
my friend.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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Pepper
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2 posted 04-08-2000 10:41 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

You painted a beautiful picture here, Lucky, with such vivid imagery .....
Perfect !!!!

 "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars."
_Les Brown_
Aimster
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3 posted 04-08-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Lucky~

I felt like I was "in" this piece. Wonderful imagery you have done here. You have a refreshing style and i agree with marge, doesn't matter the number of years you are. age is just a number...i know a major cliche but it's the truth! take care


amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~


[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 04-08-2000).]
Martie
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4 posted 04-08-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Lucky--this is full of beautiful images and words placed just so in that lucky tangle of thought and the last lines were perfect, bringing back humanness and you...even if you are wise not old you are a super poet and man...
lucky
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5 posted 04-08-2000 03:14 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

You know what..!

You guy's are the real miracle. Rosemary is over there trying to climb out of my poem but says she got a good one stewin'. I thank you all so much.

 
Meadowmuse
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6 posted 04-08-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Your poem sings of simplicity, awareness, anticipation, childlike wonderment, and the beauty of what it all means to a sensitive soul. I enjoyed this very much!

~ Claire
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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7 posted 04-08-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Sweet memories pouring over me in the power of your words.  What a gift!  I think this is one of your best, though there are so many of your best, it's hard to determine! But honestly, those surprise endings!  I don't know!  (Just teasing, you know!) Your descriptions of the sights and sounds of springs from seasons of life unending, are so vivid and rich.

 
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