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Phantom In My Dreams

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Eloise
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Mr. Sandman is knocking upon my door
With stardust for these eyes.
And off to dream land I go once more
To that fantasy land up in the skies.

Once again I see him standing there.
Fading in and out it seems.
Congenial, charming and debonair
This phantom in my dreams.

Who is this mysterious energy
That greets me in my sleep?
He calls to me and teases me.
The illusion is embedded deep.

Remove the mask you hide behind.
Let me see who you really are.
And then perhaps I just may find
The one I admire from afar.
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Songbird
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1 posted 04-08-2000 01:46 AM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Nice melody flow through this. I really like it.
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2 posted 04-08-2000 02:25 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Eloise~
So good to see you back in here, gal.
This is a lovely illusionary piece.
I really enjoyed the flow of it.
~*Marge*~


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Eloise
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3 posted 04-08-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Septsong, thank you.

Marge, thanks a lot.  It's great to be back. I've been on the road with my job quite a bit but when I returned I started having computer problems and still am.  Not sure how long I will be here this time.
Aimster
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4 posted 04-08-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

-Eloise...

I really liked this piece a lot! Dreams are pretty intense and powerful. They can leave us feeling a wide range of emotions. You have captured that wonderfully here. Hope to see more from you.

Take care,
AMY  

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5 posted 04-08-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome back, Eloise! Nice to see you again! This is a beautiful poem! Hope your computer problems are a thing of the past real soon!

Denise
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