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A game of marbles
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A game of marbles |
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jbowie Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 135BANGOR (that OR) ME |
I can feel the marbles slipping through my fingers little glass reminders of what I am losing The problem is this is not a game and only now do I realize I never knew how to play |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I always know when I click on one of your poems...its gonna be a profound statement dressed in a very few powerful, select words...this one is that times 10... awesome, truly. your have a unique talent for less is more! take care, jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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jbowie Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 135BANGOR (that OR) ME |
thanks, you always make me feel good with your comments. This is a new style for me and I found it is alot eaisier to put my thoughts out there when I just write it as I think it. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I really like this, particularly the "little glass reminders" image. A very neat perspective. ~ Claire |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Very intreaging  Excellent! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JBowie~ It seems that just writing it 'as you think it' is a wonderful avenue for you. Take care ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Loosing your marbles are you?, LOL I think I already lost most of mine. Nice poem!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, James! I like this style and you do it so well! Denise |
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