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You Dont Know Me

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Aimster
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0 posted 04-07-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

YOU DONT KNOW ME
By: Amy M. Kennedy

Don't tell me you know me
For you donít have a clue
You don't know the uphill climb Iíve had
Or what I've had to go through
Never walking a day in my shoes
You do not know my pain
Or the many tears I've cried
As I stood out in the rain
You think you know me so well
But that is simply not the case
I hide the real me many times
Behind my smile, my face
Why do I hide you might ask?
I am scared to show my inner-self
How dare you laugh when I say that
You who is all consumed with their self
My heart has been broken more than Iíd like to recall
So I build up these fences
Making sure I had a strong wall
I tried to show you who I was
But you laughed at me
So I tried again, gave you a second chance
But again you dismissed me without so much as a glance
So now my friend, I walk away
Just remember youíre the one who wanted it this way
You donít know me
You just pretend you do
And now that I know the truth, me and you are through



 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Dawn Eclipse
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1 posted 04-07-2000 11:26 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was a very expressive piece.  I enjoyed reading it... and in fact have been feeling the same things.  Fences are good... but only last so long.  Thank you for sharing your gifts with me!

 "It is in our aloneness
that we recognize our oneness,
even as the single droplet of water
knows also that it is the sea."Daniel

*Cassie Roseen*

Janet Marie
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2 posted 04-07-2000 11:51 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

powerful words amy-girl...very well written and expressed...you can write like this...and still be sunshine...we just have to put on our dark glasses  
great job...write it out...work it out...
love ya, jm

 The stars shine so bright, now's the time
I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face,
Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you
And held you close.
Now I will reach for the stars...
Because Oh my love, that's where you are...
Though the storms of black night rage on
I still see your face
I still feel your lips on mine
And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...
vertical horizon

Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 04-08-2000 03:00 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Smiles sometimes cover sorrow and yes, we do build fences. This person who wrotee this has experienced pain, and expresses it very powerfully. Well done
Liz
INclan
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4 posted 04-08-2000 07:53 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Aimster,

well written and well said.  Did you tape it to his forehead before you walked away?

INclan
Pepper
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5 posted 04-08-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I think many will identify with this piece Amy ....
Excellent expression ....


 "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars."
_Les Brown_
vandana
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6 posted 04-08-2000 11:27 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Nicely done!!!!!!!
Martie
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7 posted 04-08-2000 11:58 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Amy, powerful and purposeful emotion expressed so well.
just_another_fe
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8 posted 04-08-2000 01:40 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

The was great amy. im also curious if you taped it to his forehead lol

 Don't fear failure so
much that you refuse to
try new things. The
saddest summary of a
life contains three
descriptions:
could have,
might have,
and should have.
--Louis Boone

Songbird
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9 posted 04-08-2000 01:49 PM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Excellent poem expresses those feelings we have all felt at one time or another.
Destiny
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10 posted 04-08-2000 02:14 PM       View Profile for Destiny   Email Destiny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Destiny

you go girl!

it's always tough to actually give up and walk away, but when you have to, you have to.. great piece

Destiny  
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