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Sven
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0 posted 04-07-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

destiny's melody plays within all of us
     sometimes in a major key, sometimes in minor
all we have to do is hear it, and when we do
     our lives are made all the more finer

destiny's melody sings to us in the wind
     a haunting tune urging us to greater things
giving us the strength that we need to go on
     helping us to find our song and make our souls sing

destiny's melody sings to us the music of life
     it also sing to us the music of love
it's voice sings to all of us, loud and clear
     singing like an angel, sent from above

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-07-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

music to our eyes and ears Sven...
very nice...and I think I know where your songs of destiny can be heard (smile)
no wonder your so inspired...
take care jm

 The stars shine so bright, now's the time
I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face,
Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you
And held you close.
Now I will reach for the stars...
Because Oh my love, that's where you are...
Though the storms of black night rage on
I still see your face
I still feel your lips on mine
And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...
vertical horizon

Danny Holloway
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2 posted 04-08-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Sven, well said and well written.
Isis
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oh God Sven!!  This is one of your best!!  So beautiful and truly inspired!!  Destiny's Melody, I don't often hear, but with your guiding me, I'll hear those harmonious voices in the wind again....  Simply breathtaking...  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)




[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 04-08-2000).]
Lone Wolf
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4 posted 04-08-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sven....excellent words.  Nice flow and message.  I like it.  

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5 posted 04-09-2000 08:59 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all. . .

JM, where?

Danny, thanks... as always...

Isis, I hope so, and I hope it's as beautiful as the one that I hear.. .

LW, thank you...

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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6 posted 04-09-2000 09:03 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

I enjoyed this very much!  I especially liked the line..."destiny's melody sings to us in the wind a haunting tune urging us to greater things"  

 "It is in our aloneness
that we recognize our oneness,
even as the single droplet of water
knows also that it is the sea."Daniel

*Cassie Roseen*


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7 posted 04-09-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Sven--love the musical theme in your work!
(I'm just a tad partial to singin' and dancin' meself!)  Thank you, Mr. Lovely, for adding grace of melody to my mind.
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Very pretty, Sven.  

~ Claire
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9 posted 04-10-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for Destiny   Email Destiny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Destiny

sven... your words always touch me...

Destiny  
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