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When thoughts come from anger

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ElektraXOXO
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0 posted 04-07-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for ElektraXOXO   Email ElektraXOXO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ElektraXOXO

A peom written in my lowest of times, many trials was I going through.


So close to death
I seemed to stray
Beneath the ground
Beneath I lay
Cold and lonely
Full of hate
A dreaded torture
Lead my fate
Doors and doors
I seemed to pass
Mirror mirror
The looking glass
The gateway to hell
Will now be open
Now I know
That I am chosen
Pass the pit
Pass the dome
Under the good
Is where I roam
With the evil
Where angels there are none
Deep in hell
Where I come from

© Copyright 2000 Yvonne Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-08-2000 12:10 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Definitely had to be a down time to write this one. You convey that well to the reader.
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2 posted 04-08-2000 03:27 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Elektra~
You sure packed a punch
with your emotions in this.
Well done.
~*Marge*~


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Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 04-08-2000 03:41 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Elektra. I recognize that pit, but when you're down so low, isn't it great how high then you can soar? Your poem expresses well that feeling
Liz
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4 posted 04-08-2000 06:35 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

You express the feeling of being lowest of low very well.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

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5 posted 04-09-2000 12:10 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Excellent poem, well written.

Denise
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