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Why do you do this to me?
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Why do you do this to me? |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
I wonder what I mean to you? You haunt me from inside. The passion that I feel for you keeps tearing as in tides. You had me in a special place, and then you let me go. I said goodbye, you went your way, I cried for you, you know! Each time you called, I talked with you, the hours passed on by. We said our friendship meant the world, the passion slowly died. I finally grasped the thought that I would never hold you close. You called me up, and said we'd meet for dinner up the street. I met with you, and once again, the feelings surfaced through. I thought I would be strong enough to talk and meet with you. You drove me home, then looked at me, and melted through my eyes. You kissed me gently, I backed away, I sadly said goodnight... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very well said, Tulip. I have no answers, but this is so hard to bear...good luck. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Thank you Elizabeth! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
You were strong Tulip ... you said 'goodnight' .... Stated very beautifully ... "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars." _Les Brown_ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well written, Tulip! I could feel the tension and sadness. Denise |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Very beautiful poem. I hope you find your way through all of this.  "It is in our aloneness that we recognize our oneness, even as the single droplet of water knows also that it is the sea."Daniel *Cassie Roseen* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I know Tulip I guess it will always be true until the end of time... the deeper you get in the harder it is to walk away from a relationship. You have expressed it very well. James |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wonderful Poem, I hope time heals your wounds.*S* The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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MoonOnTheOcean New Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 8 |
A very importent piece. It shows very sincere emotion that I have also dealt with. It's tough to make it through those long nights, but you will find a way. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Hey all, It's hard being alone, but even harder being drug through the mud...it's time for me to be happy being alone!!! |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Ugh... it sounds like those dreaded words I've heard too many times before. "We're too good of friends..." or something to that effect... I personally believe that the best relationship come from friendships. Seems like the ones closest to me think otherwise though. If you need a little hope, I was engaged to the last person who said that to me... so it's not always a loss. Anyways... very beautiful work... i know I'm a little late but I just found teh place today. =) Good luck. "We always said it would be good to go away, someday, but if there's nothing there to make things change, if it's the same to you I'll just hang." --Matchbox20 (Hang) |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
White K- Thank you for what you said. I know there's hope, but sometimes it's best just to let go... |
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