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Another life

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It just wasnít meant to be
It isnít in the stars
That we should be together now
But maybe this will change
And we can be together
In another time, another place
Another life

I know my love will last
And in this new life, I may deserve you
And fate will be kind enough
To let me have your love

Youíll be changed in this new life, also
You wonít be so cold, so cunning
So cruel to those who love you
Iíll be beautiful in your eyes
In another time, another place
Another life

You may not know it now
But love is a surprise, as we all know
We will both be surprised with this love
In another time, another place
Another life

Farewell, my love
Iíll see you again
Another time, another place
Another life



 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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1 posted 04-07-2000 08:15 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

You know, lovebug, you are quite a poet.
Your writing has changed in wonderful directions. You are amazing.
Liz
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Little LoveBug~
Another time, place or life ...
you'll still be the same wonderful
person you are now.

You are more than deserving ...
now, today ... forever.
Do not settle for less today !
~*Marge*~




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I love your perspective in this poem!  
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Thank you all for your kind words!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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