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One More TIme |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. 
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Let me know you One more time Give me that one chance I wish so deeply I had I no longer care for your voice It no longer matters your name I will let you enter my world Of lush tranquility And explosive highs One more time.... Come to my window and cry out how deeply you can penetrate my soul My life... One more time Let those arms embrace me Let your heat entrap me So that I can't stand it anymore.. I will poison your lips with a kiss And it will work my magick on you Until you wish the same To be with me One more time..... "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
*wow*! My life... One more time Let those arms embrace me Let your heat entrap me So that I can't stand it anymore.. I will poison your lips with a kiss And it will work my magick on you Until you wish the same To be with me One more time..... This one was definitely powerful...the above stanza being my favorite...but the whole thing was quite good! Take care, AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is an excellent poem that touched me deeply. Keep up the good work! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like the poem (the skull with the green eyes scares me though!)... |
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