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SorrowsMystress
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since 04-01-2000
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do


0 posted 04-07-2000 04:14 PM       View Profile for SorrowsMystress   Email SorrowsMystress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SorrowsMystress

Let me know you
One more time
Give me that one chance
I wish so deeply I had
I no longer care for your voice
It no longer matters your name
I will let you enter my world
Of lush tranquility
And explosive highs
One more time....
Come to my window and cry out
how deeply you can penetrate my soul
My life...
One more time
Let those arms embrace me
Let your heat entrap me
So that I can't stand it anymore..
I will poison your lips with a kiss
And it will work my magick on you
Until you wish the same
To be with  me
One more time.....



 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath
© Copyright 2000 Kimberlee Jones - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
Charlotte, NC


1 posted 04-07-2000 05:54 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

*wow*!

My life...
One more time
Let those arms embrace me
Let your heat entrap me
So that I can't stand it anymore..
I will poison your lips with a kiss
And it will work my magick on you
Until you wish the same
To be with  me
One more time.....

This one was definitely powerful...the above stanza being my favorite...but the whole thing was quite good!

Take care,
AMY

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
LoveBug
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2 posted 04-07-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

This is an excellent poem that touched me deeply. Keep up the good work!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


3 posted 04-07-2000 08:36 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like the poem (the skull with the green eyes scares me though!)...
 
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