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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458
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They were but two lovers strong and true Fate interviened and it was not to be So they made a fateful journey to a mountain high Stood with tears in thier eyes and said a final goodbye. Thier story is told in decades to pass Who they are and why we are not sure Yet when you stand upon the spot and look out into the sky so blue You feel thier love, still pulsing true. You feel thier pain as they know it is never to be You know they loved so pure, they would rather not live alone So in death they join hands and hearts Knowing now, they will never be apart. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very sad, Sue. Beautifully written! Denise |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Anyone got a kleenix???????? Sad poetry makes me....uh.....(this is for the lady's only to read) teary eyed. Nice poem Lorelei54. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lorelei, Enjoyed your sad little poem. What's happening? I sure miss you wonderful people. *L* Sy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing..I enjoyed this...James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Excellent, I'd like to see more from you Liz |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wow, Lorelei! You're turning into a poetry factory! Two poems in three days!! Attagirl! Let's see a bunch more  |
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