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Fate Intercedes
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Fate Intercedes |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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(Just a goofy little poem here, playing with some rhyme schemes) Fate Intercedes In dark of night, such grand delight Despite the stormy weather Safe inside, they’d shared a ride In the cab together His name was Bill, her name was Jill And while the cool rain fell In warm back seat of taxi neat They sat and talked a spell She was a writer, he a firefighter They both were twenty eight She liked Poe, He the Alamo And both were running late He liked the sea and so did she They both liked Robert Frost She met his eyes, as blue as skies And laughed, I think we’re lost “Tenth and Abbey,” she told the cabby “Hey I’m going there too!” “To a dinner party with Beth and Marty?” He laughed, “This can’t be true!” “You’re my blind date. We both are late And we’ve already met” “While they are waiting, anticipating Their plans we’ve now upset” They laughed of fate and being late They laughed at best of plans Then at the party of Beth and Marty They entered holding hands < !signature--> To love means never to be afraid of the windstorms of life: should you shield the canyons from the windstorms you would never see the true beauty of their carvings. ~Elizabeth Kubler-Ross [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 04-07-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is absolutely delightful, Ruth!! I love it! It gave me a great big smile!!  Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hoot-girl this is NOT goofy... its absolutely CHARMING!!! the rhyme and flow are PERFECT...and the emotions and imagery are a delight to read. very cool poem hoot!!!you seem to be enjoying your self poeticly these days...and we are enjoying too  take care,jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Lovely, Ruth! This is very good. You won't believe this, but I just had a blind date myself, and everything turned out lovely, too. We have been talking on the phone ever since, and things are going really well. Thank you for brightening up my day with this one!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Oh this is so cute...I love it! Play around with rhyme schemes more, please!  |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
loved your rhyme scheme! i just went on a blind date last weekend, and i'm here to tell you that they don't all turn out this well! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
well guys...I have a blind date tonight and can only hope it goes half this well...lol |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is such a charming story and done so well...brought me a smile, it did. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Fate has a way, that only fate will know. Hoot, this was really fun to read. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Ruth, what a darling poem tale! Thanks for sharing this here...it's lovely! I hope your blind date tonight is wonderful and full of vision. ~ Claire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, This was a delight to read, enjoyed your wit and humor. *L* |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed muchly. Now you have returned a smile to me... *smile* |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was witty and a bit humorous. Goofy-no way. I enjoyed the read. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ruth I love it! Uplifting and cheery, and just FUN! <*\\\>< YOUR LIFE IS NOT A COINCIDENCE. IT'S A REFLECTION OF YOU! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Play on, Ruthie!!!!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ This is adorably cute. Hope you have/had a grand time. And ? ? ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Pure Delight! Ruth, you have out done yourself. Yes, I really enjoyed it. I liked the ending best....they entered holding hands. INclan |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Absolutely delightful Hoot ... It's the 8th and I'm dying to know ...  "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars." _Les Brown_ |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Hay... I was just thinking... is this "interceding" stuff hard to come by, or can I pick one up on the way home from 7/11..? But really, I think I'll just tip-toe out of here before I get in any deeper. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lady Hoot, How charming this was, I enjoyed it so much. Thank you, Cerenity [This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 04-09-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hey everyone, thanks for the replies. I'll have to admit, I think mine turned out better |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
I love it very cool and funny |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ruth, This was excellent writing, and I elated for you that everything went great |
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