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Hurt and Consequence

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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do

0 posted 04-07-2000 10:21 AM       View Profile for SorrowsMystress   Email SorrowsMystress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SorrowsMystress

Every day there's a new bruise to cover
I thought you were my soulmate, my savior, my lover
Seduce me then screw me over seems to be your goal
Your words of disgust have been taking thier toll
You make me hate everything, you make me hate me
There's no one as messed up as you make me out to be
You somehow think that I never loved you
Though I've stayed through all of the things that you do
So up yours, I love you and could care less what you say
Maybe you could love me again, maybe someday

 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath
© Copyright 2000 Kimberlee Jones - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-08-2000 08:15 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

painfilled poem SM, but very well expressed emotions...
healing and strength always comes to us from our writing.
You should post some of your poems over in Dark Passions(if your not already.
take care, jm

 The stars shine so bright, now's the time
I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face,
Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you
And held you close.
Now I will reach for the stars...
Because Oh my love, that's where you are...
Though the storms of black night rage on
I still see your face
I still feel your lips on mine
And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...
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2 posted 04-08-2000 08:40 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Well written, ShadowsMystress. Stand tall in yourself.

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3 posted 04-08-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

"Everyday there's a new bruise to cover"
Ouch ....
I hope this isn't a true life experience that you are living, SorrowsMystress ... I did live this .. and finally found the courage to get out .... I now love and respect myself and found someone who I love and truly loves me ... instead of bruises; I now have flowers ....
Very well expressed .....

 "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars."
_Les Brown_

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4 posted 04-08-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster


Even though this was painfully sad, still beautifully written. you write from a soul that has experienced a lot of emotions. this i can tell from your work. i hope you keep as jan says "writing it out...working it out". writing truly is (at least for me) a way of healing and learning. take care!


P.S. I agree...if you're aren't already you should post some in Dark Passions.

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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