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killer222
Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 48
Northolt,Middlesex,England

0 posted 2000-04-07 06:12 AM


A short poem but alot of sentimental value to me

To you

When you laugh
It makes me happy
When you smile
It makes me warm
When you look me in the eyes
I am under your spell
When you cry
I know this is where I want to be
When you touch me
It makes me nervous
When you kiss me
My heart misses a beat
When we are together
I am in heaven




 "shun the frumious Bandersnatch!"
Killer222 :o)

© Copyright 2000 Mark T K - All Rights Reserved
Mike
Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

1 posted 2000-04-07 08:40 AM


Nothing wrong with a short poem, nothing at all.  Nicely done.
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-04-07 10:48 AM


This is simply beautiful!!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-04-07 11:35 AM


Very sweet!  

Denise

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