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I Still Care, I do!

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neitham
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Overwhelming waves of emotion.
Breaking through the seam.
Often fills me.
Even in my hour of silence.

Memories.
That won't let me be.
It's all coming back.
Taking me on a journey.

Dreams.
That are Realities.
Realities.
That should have been Dreams.
You?
Maybe its all very vain.
Reconciliation, Introspection.
Heart, that won't let go.
Hurt, that cuts deep.
Spending time.
Me and my thoughts.
With you and your dreams.
Sentiments.
They were just ornaments.
Doubts from the very start.
Even the green meadows.
A sight indeed, from a far.
Does it really matter.
Thorns bed them at closer look?

Me?
Sure, I still do care.
But I wish thee well....

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christies heart
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since 08-10-99
Posts 192
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1 posted 04-07-2000 05:44 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

"Sentiments.
They were just ornaments.
Doubts from the very start."

Very nice..and I can relate. I especially love the above lines.


 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

Native American prayer


Janet Marie
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Dreams.
That are Realities.
Realities.
That should have been Dreams.
You?
Maybe its all very vain.
Reconciliation, Introspection.
Heart, that won't let go.
Hurt, that cuts deep.
Spending time.
Me and my thoughts.
With you and your dreams.
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this poem is so cool!!
Its so rich in your deep thoughts and emotions...very well written out...
and the last lines meaning is perfection!
excellent, I enjoyed this read.
take care, jm

 The stars shine so bright, now's the time
I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face,
Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you
And held you close.
Now I will reach for the stars...
Because Oh my love, that's where you are...
Though the storms of black night rage on
I still see your face
I still feel your lips on mine
And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...
vertical horizon

 
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