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I Feel The Breeze

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A Romantic Heart
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Deep into the forest glade,
Underneath the willow shade,

My body feels the breeze,

Misty dew drops falling around,
barefoot feet touching the ground,

My body feels the breeze,

Running through the lilly field,
As my body yeilds,

My body feels the breeze,

Moonlight shadows falling around,
Lying in the clover I am found,

My body feels the breeze,

I close my eyes,
I feel you here,

Come Whisper all around me,
Come whisper in my ear,
underneath the tree,

Gently breathe upon me,
Inhale all of me you see,

I stand here in your mist,
As you blow all over me your kiss,

From my head to my feet,
Surrounded by you I am complete,

Sometimes your just a tease,
But I love to feel the breeze....



 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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1 posted 04-07-2000 02:28 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Don't tell any of my male friends i said this, but this is SO romantic.  Can almost feel the breeze from your expression.
very, very nice (and that's no tease)
Denise
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2 posted 04-07-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful!

Denise
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3 posted 04-07-2000 06:01 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Romantic Heart-

this was simply wonderful and romantically beautiful! i liked the images that you you so poetically described here. your way with words is very powerful!

amy  

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A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 04-07-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Danny:I bet you are a tease...with words of poetry...haha

Thank you deniseI can always count on you to read my poems...thank you!

Aim:thanks for the compliment,Words are powerful...and combined with poetic expression they are dynomite!
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