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SorrowsMystress
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since 04-01-2000
Posts 179
I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do


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I lie awake
And breathe your air
Taking in consumed folicles of life
You are one,
I am one
The only
Individual
I still think
For myself
Among others
I taste the blood on my lip
Metalic and warm
Like soft body sweat
Ater a passionate contention
Stripped and insipid
As you are
As you were
Individual
Inspired to be set free
Yet still able to
Hang on
One
Two
Three
It's slipping away from me
I gain everything you have lost
And feel free enough to do those things
I desired most out of you
The person that came to be
Individual
But somehow I still see
Even though you've blinded me
You haven't taken me over
Although I know
You wish you did
You had me once
You had me twice
I fell in your trap
While trying to catch you in mine
I onced believed you were
Individual
Do not intimidate me
Do not negate me
I will entomb you in your
own Misconceptions
I am you
I am me
I am everything
You wouldn't expect
This Individual to be.......



 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath
© Copyright 2000 Kimberlee Jones - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
Arkansas


1 posted 04-11-2000 11:17 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Sounds like you're quite the mystery!  At least you know who you are, some of us can't even say that. LOL  Hang in there, wow the emotions you write with are staggering.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


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Your words speak powerfully...nicely done.
Loved the phrase "folicles of life"  
Danny Holloway
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since 01-15-2000
Posts 2072
Tulsa, OK


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I like the self confidence you reveal.
Nice writing.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

 
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