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Sven
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0 posted 04-07-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Open your eyes
     See the love I have to give
Open your arms
     Hold me close for as long as I live
                    Open your mind
                         Remember that I am yours and you are mine
                    Open your heart
                         Know that I'll love you for all time
Open your mouth
     Tell me you'll love me forever
Open your hands
     We will always walk together
                    Open your spirit
                         Feel the love that I have for you
                    Open your soul
                         Our love is the pallate, full of wonderful hues

Open your eyes and see
          Open your mind and remember
Open your arms and hold
          Open your heart and know
Open your mouth and tell
          Open your spirit and feel
Open your hands and walk
          Open your soul and paint

Paint our love, a work of art
                      a work of art is our love
                                    art is our love, love is our life
                                                         love is our life, you are my love

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl





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1 posted 04-07-2000 12:45 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Sven, this is beautiful and filled with such language of love...written directly from your heart.

~ Claire
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2 posted 04-07-2000 01:02 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Sven, this is fantastic...it could be a song...set to strumming guitars...
very beautiful words in this one.
take care, jm

 The stars shine so bright, now's the time
I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face,
Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you
And held you close.
Now I will reach for the stars...
Because Oh my love, that's where you are...
Though the storms of black night rage on
I still see your face
I still feel your lips on mine
And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...
vertical horizon

Marina
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3 posted 04-07-2000 01:29 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Well....this certainly opened up something in me!  We will discuss THAT later.
A very beautiful poem, from a beautiful poet.

Marina
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4 posted 04-07-2000 08:44 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is grand! Just so good!!! Your work lately is so fine!!!
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5 posted 04-07-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sven....Wow....this is absolutely fabulous.  Excellent layout and very loving words.  I can feel your heart beating through the screen.  You are extremely talented my friend.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
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Sven
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6 posted 04-07-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all. . .

This is kind of new for me, I usually don't do the free form like this, but this is how it turned out. . .

All of you, your words mean a lot. . .thank you again. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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