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Lost Voice

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CupidyCassie
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0 posted 04-07-2000 12:07 AM       View Profile for CupidyCassie   Email CupidyCassie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CupidyCassie

The knife slid across my face
No one anywhere that I could embrace
I tried to scream but no one would hear
I was frozen in dreadful fear
My time left seemes too short to tell
I was in some deep, dark cell
He frightened me with every move that he made
My life was really starting to fade
I knew I was somewhere under the ground
It would surely take a long time for my body to be  
found
The blade punctured my skin
My voice became very grim
I didn't think it could ever happen to me
He whispered, "I wonder who my next victim will be?"



 
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 04-07-2000 12:19 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Wow!!! You gave me chills clean to the bone.  Powerful writing!!
poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 04-11-2000 10:57 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Chilling to say the least!  I've never written anything this spooky, but this is very dark and scarey!  My worst fear is being buried alive, I think. This spooked me like that.  AAaaaaahh!!
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